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In a Dream

floating… yellow heat banana float, tasting good blue, blue sky…life….. great!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/9/2012 10:44:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Lorraine. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2012 5:02:00 AM
A very well written haiku poem, Lorraine. - Lovely - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2012 4:40:00 PM
very uplifting Lorraine. Rollo
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Date: 11/8/2012 4:02:00 PM
sounds amazing, love elizabeth
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