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my body fractures in eternal space; extinguished is the lurid sun blinded by the moonless darkness and stars. nestled in the transitional of poetic music encircle by their muffled sounds in unchanging existence of breathless passion. can you feel it feel of surrender surrendering to a flickering torch embers warm cinders crackle riding within. hope doesn't fade, but falls upon my lap with clenched hands upon unhurried, no disquietude within passage ignore the world let flutter seduce the moonless night and stars upon the dawn. 6/14/2020

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Date: 6/17/2020 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations Eve on your top win, you certainly deserved it - a talented write. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/17/2020 6:43:00 AM
Your muse feels like a comfortable blanket at the end of a rushed day. Love it. Blessings Eve :)
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Date: 6/17/2020 4:30:00 AM
Wow...You left a lot to imagination...I like it
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:22:00 PM
Beautifully penned Eve! I see why Brian honored this with first place! Congratulations my friend. xxoo
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:12:00 PM
WOW! This is so beautiful--enchanting write!!
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:45:00 AM
Enjoyed your verse Eve, sometimes we have to detach ourselves from earthly things to find peace. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 6/14/2020 9:17:00 PM
A gorgeous delicate ethereal write, Eve. Exquisitely penned.
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