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If I Were An Animal What Would I Be

I like it cool and I like it dark. Long deep sleep makes me grrhhhhh. Wake me, I'm a nasty mother. My stride is slow, and low, and mean. Piss me off, I dare you. I'll show you how cuddly I can be. Food binges turn me on, Bring it all, I can handle it. But watch your back, You can't walk all over me anymore. * * * I'm waiting for you. Next time, you're dinner. Contest If I Were An Animal, What Would I Be? Brenda Atry 5/12/2011

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Date: 9/13/2014 7:58:00 PM
Lol nice write :) I enjoyed it
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Date: 7/6/2013 10:39:00 PM
:-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA"
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Date: 7/4/2013 10:00:00 AM
BRENDA, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT
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Date: 7/2/2013 9:34:00 AM
Ha! Awesome! Very enjoyable setting! :)
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:05:00 AM
Whoever you are -. Watch out for the bear. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 6/30/2013 7:17:00 PM
Great style of writing
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Date: 7/25/2012 6:33:00 PM
If I could be dinner for you,Brenda,it would be ribs! Lioness - great attitude in this piece - J.A.B.
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