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I Wait the Ocean Waves To Wash My Soul

My heart races touching your deep Spirit's kiss, My tear's curb crumbles greening my shrink cry. The softness of your voice soothes my abyss. My soul torn apart wondering to know why. Wrong thoughts and so cruel wait my tears and cry The terrors of love just give them a black yard And my loneliness makes my sad soul to dye When to sink my reality it's very hard. I wait my hope which will never come to guard This hope hunger squeezes tighter my soul's knee. I'm clinging to the past which is like a shard That part which is still alive inside of me. Much more confused on how to think or feel, I talk, I dream and I am your balance wheel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/7/2016 10:29:00 AM
Marieta Maglas, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:57:00 PM
Interesting sonnet that you have penned...Enjoyed reading this eve..Sonnet is one of my favorites.Sara
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:04:00 PM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Marieta. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 5:01:00 AM
I think you mean die not dye, I'm not entirely sure what 'my soul's knee' is or indeed what 'greening my shrink cry' means. However those things aside I did enjoy your poem, it does indeed conjour up a sense of sadness. I was expecting more watery references, nice try.
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