I See

I see your loving face, each night as I dream. I taste your lips, with each new kiss. Date Written: 6/13/2021 Honorable Mention Bite Size Poem no7 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/18/2021 10:35:00 AM

Softly romantic, Paula. I quite like your poignant piece. Be well. Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2021 11:07:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this romantic write. It is an honor to win in this contest. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Greg Gaul

Date: 6/18/2021 8:03:00 AM

Very intimate Paula. Yes, you do see. Fine brevity. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2021 9:06:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. I did not know I had a win. It is an honor to win in this fun contest. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/17/2021 12:03:00 PM

Very cute Paula, good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2021 9:05:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.............

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2021 10:00:00 PM

Ah, delicate and pretty. Good luck in Line's contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/16/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this one, I See. Have a blessed day.............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/14/2021 11:44:00 AM

Romance is in the air Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2021 12:43:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best for a win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/13/2021 11:29:00 PM

Four lines, yet so much between them! Great bite-size write, Paula! Cheers, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2021 12:42:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this bite-size romantic write. Have a blessed day..............

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/13/2021 9:39:00 PM

Very sweet!! You said a lot of sweetness with this short romantic write!Awesome!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2021 12:42:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this romantic write. Have a blessed day..............