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((** Natures Nurse **)) Hot temperatures someone call the spring doctor cold fertilizer ((** Early Bird **)) Fresh morning light sweet SAP falling on my plate Lego my Eggo ((** Desert Rose **)) In the dead of night One star sings me a sad song cactus feels my pain ((** Looks that kill **)) What else can I say? Intrigue me with silence look into my eyes ((** Home Sweet Home **)) End of road my final destination Next stop Olympus! ((** Heaven or Hell **)) Leave all dirt behind Welcome mat above sunrise running for the door by;p.d.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2016 11:05:00 PM
gaagaa googoo **SKAT**
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Date: 5/7/2014 8:39:00 AM
What fun, my fav is **Home Sweet... . Great stuff. Still out driving around South Australia, falling in and out of internet connections. It's great to be home, just a shame that my gorgeous wife has returned to NZ. Oh well, all in time.
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:27:00 AM
Brought a chuckle this morning with this series of Haiku's. Have a great day. Phyl
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:30:00 PM
buenas noches nga pala!
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:29:00 PM
ok go to sleep, pzztop-- & haha sige na nga, sorry,foot in mouth for me-- i learned a new word for dolphin today ^_^ -- haha somehow lumba lumba meant differently to me-- sige I will send you a koneho next time-- how many tupa have you counted now? isa? dalawa? tatlo? (123) -- Zzzzzzzz-- hilik (snore!!) Zzzzzzz
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Date: 5/1/2011 6:41:00 PM
these were very good thanks fort he ideas lol cory
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Date: 4/29/2011 3:34:00 PM
These are funny Poet Destroyer. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:44:00 AM
very nice, good job..cory
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Date: 4/27/2011 1:03:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my work. Good work here too, I like.
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Date: 4/27/2011 11:10:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments P.D. I am glad to see you back at the Soup. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Hope life is treating you better these days. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2011 12:56:00 AM
Very great job here my friend. You are masterful in the art of 'haiku.' :) I enjoyed these very much and thank you for reviewing mine as well. God Bless You. R.M.
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:07:00 PM
Love all these haikus. Nice
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:37:00 AM
yes! 600th view is me! & 51st comment too oh wow!! Goshh you have Noo idea how much I missed getting comments from you??? SOo happy you are back! & LOL you are soo funny! I am in love with sleep, what can I say?? haha & hmmm yeah I suppose it would be valid to say that I wrote that sorta half-asleep? Wanted to sleep as I was writing that, lol--- thanks so much for dropping by...& yup me wishing you that you get that man you want ;)
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:32:00 AM
Hey Babes, "Holding Close" and "Sun and Stars" are 2 u might like... Hope they make you smile!!! always Michael
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Date: 4/23/2011 10:13:00 PM
PD - Welcome mat ( guessing its YOGA mat ?) . Thought provoking topics. Many thanks for comments on my work;'I am bored with Poetrysoup'. Luv & best wishes & joy to accompany with - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:21:00 PM
Very creative work..Glad you are back but sad for your sadness in your family..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2011 8:20:00 AM
this is some write, very creative and well written, enjloyed it.
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Date: 4/22/2011 7:05:00 AM
"What else can I say? Intrigue me with silence look into my eyes" WOW...nuff said!
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Date: 4/22/2011 5:20:00 AM
Wonderworks of haiku and senryu . last one my favourite. Anne
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Date: 4/19/2011 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured! A well deserved privledge for one who deserves the best! Sad undertones, but I'm sure you'll perk up soon enough. Keep well, take care, and wishing you the best! Mikki
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:03:00 PM
sounds like a refreshing dream in hiaku form..how are you PD? you havn't written in a while..hope all is okey. ~Always&Forever
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:36:00 AM
not a great six pack. extreamly gayish for such a name ' k.
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Date: 4/18/2011 9:19:00 AM
Very nice, I may need to try Haiku.
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:28:00 PM
P.D. What a delight these are, with "Early Bird" being my favorite. I think you have found your niche with this form. I loved them! Congratulations on them being featured.
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on this string of wonderful Haikus being featured this week. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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