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God, You Are the One- My First Poem

God, you are the one with all the blessings and powers my heart always tends to you day, night, at all hours. Nothing more, nothing less want to remain the same, just want your contentment dont want any fame. Mistakes from me in this life haunt me every night, but I know you are the one every time who makes me right. Oh! my God, just tell me to die I wont waste a sec to come to you through sky. Father, mother, siter, brother everyone will cry, but I will, though it hurts, tell them good bye. Love you God, damn to much love all your creations no other person deserves but you please accept all my devotions.

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Date: 3/11/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/7/2016 1:45:00 PM
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Ajwaj Aju
Date: 9/8/2016 11:40:00 AM
explains a lot
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Ajwaj Aju
Date: 9/8/2016 11:39:00 AM
explains a lot

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