Home » Poems » Maureen Mcgreavy » Garden Jewel

Garden Jewel

vision of blurred beats casts a ruby throat sparkling precious gem setting 18.08.16

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 8/27/2018 12:56:00 AM

A beautiful haiku indeed

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/27/2018 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Aniruddha :) xomo!

Warren Doll

Date: 8/22/2018 8:50:00 AM

A masterful haiku, Maureen. Going into my FAVS. Warren

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/27/2018 8:10:00 AM

Wow! :)) Thank you Warren! xomo

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/22/2018 1:15:00 AM

Oooh spectacular one here!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/27/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you J.W.! :) xomo

Roy Pett

Date: 8/19/2018 6:52:00 AM

Absolutely wonderful Maureen, never seen a ruby throat but your haiku has created beautiful images. :))

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/19/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Roy! I typo'd and the predictive text thought I wanted to say thank you army ;p xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/17/2018 10:02:00 PM

Oh how beautiful, Maureen. A brilliant haiku. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/18/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thank you lovely! xomo <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2018 6:58:00 PM

lovely imagery, Maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/18/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :) didn't think I'd have one for this contest, but a ruby-throated hummingbird said otherwise ;) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 8/17/2018 3:12:00 PM

You do these so well... Ku Queen..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/18/2018 8:20:00 AM

...Queen someth'n! Giggles! Thank you so much Sweet One xomo

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/17/2018 10:00:00 AM

This shows the real sweet Mo!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/17/2018 10:56:00 AM

Smooches! Thank you love <3 xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/17/2018 6:52:00 AM

Amazing my dear friend, Maureen! Good luck ! Hugs xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/17/2018 7:47:00 AM

Thank you sweet Demetrios! I saw a Ruby Throated Butterfly in my friend's garden yesterday- you would love her garden ;) love and hugs! xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/17/2018 12:20:00 AM

the first line sets the tone perfectly, Maureen, and the last line ends it perfectly.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/17/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thank you! Was lucky enough to see a ruby throated hummingbird yesterday :)) xomo!