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The palest forest grows softer then brighter in the pastel glint of evening’s light. Although the woodland dims from shadowed trees, afar Hues of near Aurora bestows a lustrous star. Finally, filament’s flames flush faded forest flowing in fired frenzy. 4 Lines Contest hosted by Silent One Anagram: PALEST-PASTEL, FOREST-SOFTER Couplet: 12 syls per line Dated 12/19/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:04:00 AM

Excellent write n win nette.. big congrats!

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/21/2015 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations! I really like how you did this.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 7:31:00 AM

What a delightful offering, Nette! Imagery takes pride of place. *** Congratulations on this merited top win. *^* Hugs -*-*- paul

John Lawless

Date: 12/20/2015 9:41:00 PM

WOW....a plethora of "F" words. Congrats on your placement Nette

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/20/2015 8:36:00 PM

Wonderful, Nette. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:25:00 PM

beautiful, Nette. I would expect no less!! Congrats.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/20/2015 5:55:00 PM

Nette, loved your soft, pale forest! Congrats and A Merry X'mas to you and your family!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:45:00 PM

nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 4:22:00 PM

I came to give you a seven, but a zero made me leave. No, no to fire - I must reconcile with that reality ... 7 ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 4:18:00 PM

The first line, the anagrams, is one of the prettiest, single, sentences I have ever read in my life. The preceding sentence is one of the most complimentary wows I have ever written in my life. When are you picking me up? I'm excited about our planned walk in that forest. Shall we trek all the way to the stream? Now, as I was being ew'd and aw'd by your first two forms, the third came and seemed to say there was a fire. Did I get that right? I keep reading it to make it not true. I'm ru

Faye Gibson

Date: 12/20/2015 4:06:00 PM

Just gorgeously written as always. Congratulations. Thank you for the winning placement in your last contest.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/20/2015 1:26:00 PM

A 7 for sure, Nette. Congratulations, Janice

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:27:00 AM

NETTE, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/20/2015 7:37:00 AM

I'm in awe with the beauty of the forest you've magically portrayed my dear friend, Nette! You're an amazing poet as always! Hugging this poem and you! Thank you sm for sharing! Thank you so much as well for stopping by on my poem. I appreciate it so much and your encouraging words. I'm sorry if I always gave late replies. This morning, I've got again unexpected appointment, so just came back now. I beg your understanding pls? Btw, Maligayang Pasko rin mahal kong kaibigan! Hugs!<3lots,LG

Ralph Sergi

Date: 12/20/2015 7:03:00 AM

Fantastic poem, nette. My compliments! Thanks for your comment.on my poem.

Manny Paras

Date: 12/20/2015 6:49:00 AM

Darn, this is downright amazing! You go from dark to light with such grace and a bit of fire!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2015 5:31:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, Nette :) - Luck in contest ! - Today I just want to wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - Huge Christmas hugs & love // Anne-Lise :)

Carly Lalion

Date: 12/20/2015 4:54:00 AM

Very picturesque with 3 forms fluidly moving as one thought! I like your forest! to the 8th note.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/19/2015 1:50:00 PM

I can see the forest through your trees! You are the Magical Mistress of Nature. Merry Christmas Nette, hugs Rick.

Thomas Martin

Date: 12/19/2015 1:18:00 PM

Wonderful! Wonderful! Such a great piece! great piece

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/19/2015 1:50:00 PM

It looks like you and Nette are occupying the same forest based on your Avatar.