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For a Vacuum Cleaner

For all the work you do, those daily chores beyond the norm in a pinch you come through, a vacuum cleaner built so strong. For you my electric power broom on dust and grit do raid. You chase dirt from any room. So very thankful you were made. A vacuum cleaner, dust buster machine this is an ode to you Can't just say you're a woman's routine a man needs a sturdy one too. 10/6/20

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Date: 10/28/2020 8:30:00 PM
Well-deserved honor...for both you and the vacuum cleaner that inspired your fine piece of work!
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Date: 10/16/2020 7:04:00 PM
this is really nice. Just right for an ode to a vacuum cleaner. I don't use mine much or I'd do an ode too haha. Congrats, Janis.
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Date: 10/16/2020 3:42:00 PM
Yes, we are thankful for our vacuum cleaners. A poem full of delightful reminders, Janis. Congratulations on your podium win.
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Date: 10/16/2020 6:04:00 AM
Nice one Janis. Brought a smile to my face. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/6/2020 2:15:00 PM
What a clever idea for this contest. Love it
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