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Fading Mist

By verge of dusk, where clear perceptions wane and clouds of sallow recollections dwell, hang viral vines where memories remain that drift about this dense primeval veil. My wounded soul lies swaddled in these folds of images dismantled in a wake of fading mist and all that it beholds for of her touch no longer I partake. Her graven lot had taken to the mend as prayer in whisper pled to the Divine, this twisting hope held tethered to the wind but death blew through and broke the fragile vine. Through muddled eyes illusions now pervade where once the dreams of dancing lovers swayed. 12-22-2022

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Date: 5/13/2023 9:06:00 AM
Dear Mark, your sonnet overflows the brim with mournful beauty. The imagery is deeply felt; "clouds of sallow recollections" and "viral vines where memories remain" and "this twisting hope held tethered to the wind / but death blew through and broke the fragile vine" - the poignant power of your artistry and gifted pen is breathtaking. Such an exquisite emotional expression of lost love! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/16/2023 6:03:00 AM
Inspirational writing Mark!
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Date: 12/22/2022 6:09:00 AM
Simply touching and so very beautiful Mark! Love it…..Debx
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