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Date written: 10/01/2016

You cling to the wilderness and plains like a shy ghost Where could you possibly be? Are you near or far? I can hear you, faintly, like beads of water slowly dripping out of a faucet, but can never quite reach you Why so elusive? Must you always play hide and seek? Or could you be somewhere in nature, trapped? I've actively searched for you in empty rooms And out in fields I sometimes walk among Yesterday, I came repeatedly clapping my hands And you clapped back to me each time Today, I did the same; thunderous silence! Are you buried in the dirt unable to make a sound? I've tenaciously tracked you through back countries choked with fog, only to end up in the middle of nowhere Has anyone ever found you out there in the wild? Maybe, just maybe, you're so lost you'll never be found

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Date: 12/6/2023 11:36:00 AM
Wow so intriguing and creative EI! I am in absolute awe reading this, this is one of those poems you get totally hooked on from the very first line till the end, and the questioning definitely is very engaging. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on getting this published too. Well deserved
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2023 1:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Inky: -) I really appreciate your awesome feedback and visit.
Date: 12/6/2023 7:52:00 AM
Wonderful writing... a echo, humm? Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Regina:-)
Date: 12/6/2023 6:15:00 AM
Edwards this is an amazing poem.. love the echo vibrations in this one.. great choice for the contest.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2023 7:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, SO:-) Most obliged.
Date: 3/5/2022 4:07:00 AM
Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/5/2022 9:33:00 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Sara:-)
Date: 2/11/2021 1:37:00 PM
A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Edward ~
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/11/2021 2:27:00 PM
One of the best poems I've ever written and so special to me. I appreciate you visiting it yet again, Line:-)
Date: 9/23/2018 11:19:00 PM
Lovely, Edward. I love the depth of this beautiful poem. Congrats on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/24/2018 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Line!:-)
Date: 9/22/2018 11:21:00 AM
I love this one, Edward. Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/22/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charles!:-) Much love...
Date: 9/21/2018 6:50:00 PM
Edward, I marvel at the manner in which you weave words to tell a story that keeps the reader mesmerized. Wonderful poem, my friend! Congrats on a well deserved win in a somewhat difficult contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/21/2018 7:44:00 PM
Thank you, Curtis!:-) I greatly appreciate your visit and wonderful comments.
Date: 7/31/2018 3:48:00 PM
Lovely, Edward. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2018 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line!
Date: 7/28/2018 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan!:-)
Date: 7/25/2018 3:27:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Edward. I love the way you used the allegories to express 'elusive love.' Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/25/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra!:-)

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