-drainpipes Rattle On - Tanka

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/3/2014 1:09:00 PM

Nicely done enjoyed the read like the part about the clean side walk, cheri

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/30/2014 9:28:00 AM

Again.......you have a way of surprising me, .....I am very flattered and honored that you regarded my poem worthy Deb, ...the latest contest was a challenge to me, such fascinating art with so many directions to go! Thank you for your approval!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2014 3:41:00 PM

very cool tanka, Debs!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/23/2014 6:16:00 AM

Captivating tanka Debbie! an enjoyable read! // paul

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2014 7:42:00 PM

"paper-mache news...." love that.....exactly what happens to newsprint in a downpour! I can always learn from you! :)....ps.....soupmail coming.....