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I value the ability to live independently Most sacred to me is the freedom and my health - every breath of dawn, is like a diamond I open the window ... just for a little while - no children are out playing the sun is shining and the lilies are blooming Spring sings its first greeting Nothing is so beautiful as the first coltsfoot Our world today ... lockdown and isolation Freedom has got a bad friend and its name is: FEAR Fear of getting sick ... Infection and illness can hit quite randomly A good saying goes: // it's hard to define an elephant, but, you recognize it when you see it // This is a time and a reminder about we are all equally vulnerable ... and mortal // Dear Father in Heaven, protect us in battle and sickness Give us hope when it seems hopeless // - Don't fear   ... but cheer Spring is my happy time ... it tingles in the stomach - // (not in the throat) I want my freedom back 27.03.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved What Matters Most To You Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 2 place in the contest

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Date: 4/19/2020 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love the little girl with your poem. You had the perfect ending with your, "Dear Father in Heaven," prayer. I guess more people are praying now than ever before. Enjoy your day and win............
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Date: 8/2/2020 10:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting and your supportive comment, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2020 10:26:00 PM
Good day to you from the Philippines. With this, may I share these thoughts in response to your piece. First, thanks for sharing this poem, and the lovely photo that goes with it. 2nd, congratulations. 3rd, I'm with you in your prayer: "Dear Father in Heaven, protect us in battle and sickness Give us hope when it seems hopeless..." God bless you.
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Date: 4/17/2020 1:45:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Beata ... much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2020 11:27:00 AM
Indeed, how precarious and threatening, as inalienable rights are one by one set aside, allowing the entry of persons and things that have no business here. Knowing w who we are and what we stand for inoculates us these travesties: whether human or inhuman. Your poem expresses your higher minded self quite artfully.
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:33:00 AM
- We all want freedom back, Mark ... but, are worried about the future - Many thanks for your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2020 12:03:00 PM
Hi my dear friend - congratulations dear soul sister on your very deserved win. Stay safe, we all hope and pray for a vaccine in less time than a whole year ahead - living has become survival! Blessings my friend. Jennifer.
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2020 7:04:00 AM
You talked about the elephant in the room, so to say without calling it by name. I Love the narration, and you ended it so beautifully. Congratulations on your win, and blessings to you. JC Hawkens
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, JC :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/4/2020 1:42:00 PM
Back with big congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:13:00 AM
- Many thanks for big congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2020 10:09:00 PM
As do we all dear Anne -Lise. Well said Keep the faith. With God all things are possible and The Great Physician will tend to those who love Him. Great job. God Bless, JB Sorry I'm so on again off again due to health issues but am battling back again. Smiles
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:12:00 AM
- Many thanks for comment and friendly visit, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2020 12:41:00 PM
Such heartfelt words Anne-Lise, as we all cling to hope and to each other - through poetry and social media. Your poem speaks for so many of us. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:30:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit, comments and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/4/2020 8:27:00 PM
Congrats this time for your win in the What Matters Most contest! Happy to see this in the winners' circle Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/29/2020 4:59:00 PM
Superb write, Sunshine. who is it harder for children or adults. I too, value the ability to live independently. Now that I am truly independent, it's lonely. Good luck in the contest,
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:29:00 AM
- A lonely time for many, dear Eve - Many thanks for your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2020 2:55:00 PM
Excellent poem. Very well written. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:28:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments and visit, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2020 2:37:00 PM
Anne-Lise, I feel less ashamed, less afraid knowing someone is writing the triumph of today in pages that future eyes already know. I only hope and pray they're ours as well. -Richard
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:27:00 AM
- We all are well, Richard ... hope you are well too :) - Many thanks for your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2020 9:26:00 AM
True, fear becomes a weapon in the hands of the aggressor therefore, I agree with you that we should cheer. Cheer for life and all those good people who sacrifice themselves for others. A very good writing dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:25:00 AM
- Demetrios, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2020 2:04:00 AM
A combination of Spring, Fear and Prayer.. And you ended with a powerful statement.. I want my freedom back.. But if we are not feeling free in our own homes where else we could be free.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:24:00 AM
- Freedom to live normally, Jenish :) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2020 4:37:00 PM
Love the picture! Love your poem!
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:22:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2020 9:21:00 AM
You are right fear is making things worse... Let's hope it get better..
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:22:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments and visit, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2020 7:35:00 AM
I so resonate with this poem, dear. Yes, I want my freedom back as well. That was a lovely poem and prayer. May God have mercy. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:21:00 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2020 6:55:00 AM
Such a lovely piece penned so eloquently Anne-Lise, you speak for many in this piece. Keep safe and well, Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:21:00 AM
- Gordom, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2020 6:08:00 AM
A very special write--you spoke for the world, Anne-Lise. Kudos for a wonderful poem. A winner in every way.
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:20:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2020 10:56:00 PM
Your poem expresses what many are feeling right now, Ann-Lise. We just need to replace fear with faith and hope. Great poem!
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:19:00 AM
- Evelyn, many thanks for your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2020 9:44:00 PM
we can all relate to this...my fears I carry with me, at night my prayers I send, my rosary I sleep with in my hands... I pray he keeps us all safe and helps to end this beast stalking the lands... stay safe my friend... hugs and blessings.. love this write!
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:18:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2020 7:43:00 PM
I agree, I want mine back too...Fighting an invisible enemy ain't easy...I can imagine you in the pic...All the best Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:18:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2020 4:36:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, You have penned such a heartfelt poem and prayer. Thank you so much for penning such a write. Have a wonderful and day :-) Alexis
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:17:00 AM
- Alexis, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2020 4:17:00 PM
i think everyone can relate to this one, anne-lise! beautifully written!
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:17:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2020 3:07:00 PM
This is a terrific write and sincere prayer Anne-Lise, so very well done My Dear...
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Date: 4/8/2020 6:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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