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Distant Thoughts

As she walked slowly Towards the woods, She kept thinking of her old house.. The one so dear to her. She remembered her friends, Her school, and her garden, As she sat on a moss-covered rock.. Almost on the verge of tears. Book on her lap, She then slowly recollected, Her parents' repeated words – “Love everything around you.” She looked around for a companion, Sitting under the tree’s shade.. Gradually starting To absorb into her surroundings. Getting out of her pensive mood, She appreciated the beauty of nature.. And feeling much more free, Went home to bid goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/21/2014 9:59:00 AM
Great poem, Sneha. The sense of finally feeling comfort at what one would consider home, is greatly expressed. Great honesty in this piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:44:00 PM
Sneha, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is beautifully written... Verlena
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Date: 6/8/2014 8:16:00 PM
SNEHA, Congrats on, Isaiah's "Distant Thought" contest. AWESOME WIN.......LUV* LINDA
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Date: 6/7/2014 10:03:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Sneha. The description of nature as the companion was deeply expressed. Great imagery, with metaphorical undertones. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 6/3/2014 9:02:00 AM
Many congrat's on your win, Sneha. Lainie
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Date: 6/1/2014 12:58:00 PM
Havent read your work before, but you did a great job with this. Congrats to you! BG
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Date: 6/1/2014 11:00:00 AM
Extremely wonderful Sneha ,, worthy of great win ! Congrats !
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Date: 6/1/2014 2:06:00 AM
Congrats on the win for distant thoughts, Sneha
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Date: 5/31/2014 11:58:00 PM
nice write, congrats on your win !
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:24:00 AM
?? This is beautifully composed. It reminds me of so many things and so many people. I felt very peaceful and at one reading it. Great job, Sneha !
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