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- Defenseless -

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Young, beautiful and... haunted - Fashionising.com

Defenseless and drained of power The reason is simple, you are a victim an emotionless being without a heart Hell is the snake in the room no one talks about brainwashed lackey - screaming silence - suppresses me with waves of steam Missing a guardian angel They find the hammer very quickly aggressive enemy, a threat The street has its own laws the world is still full of shades and gray zones Without shell protection, a defenseless turtle 15-02-2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/23/2020 8:23:00 PM
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The stark intensity expounds dramatically, Anne-Lise, emotive indeed, blessings -- Aloha!~@wk
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2020 4:11:00 AM
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- Sometimes life is hard to live, William - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/20/2020 10:03:00 AM
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Powerful poem Sunshine…I like it.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2020 11:05:00 AM
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- Many thanks for liking it, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2020 7:03:00 PM
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wow...powerful and full of emotions...an excellent write...I am not familiar with this form but your poem is very well crafted, best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2020 3:50:00 AM
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- Sandra, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/18/2020 10:07:00 AM
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Lovely piece well-penned Anne-Lise, Have a blessed day, hugs , Gordon
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 1:30:00 PM
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- Thank you so much, Gordon :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/18/2020 4:40:00 AM
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Excellent write, Anne-Lise. very touching! Hugs Charlie :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2020 4:46:00 AM
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- Thank you so much, Charlie :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/17/2020 11:36:00 AM
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"Missing a guardian angel' - what a poignant line, this touched my heart today-
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/17/2020 12:52:00 PM
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- Michelle, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 2/16/2020 12:28:00 PM
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The street has its own laws very strong statement and so very true A sure win for the contest!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2020 12:35:00 PM
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- Many thanks for your kind visits and comments, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 2/16/2020 7:50:00 AM
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Wow. this is excellent. Many people will relate to this. x
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2020 11:10:00 AM
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- Thank you so much, Peter :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/16/2020 7:41:00 AM
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And that I don't want to be..." Defenseless" Enjoyed the read...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2020 11:10:00 AM
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- Thank you so much, Arturo :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Catie Lindsey
Date: 2/16/2020 5:54:00 AM
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Goodness! I sure am glad this is not the truth of your life. Best wishes in the contest. :-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2020 11:09:00 AM
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- Thank you so much, Catie :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/15/2020 4:45:00 PM
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Quite deep and dark Anne, well written. Good luck. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2020 11:09:00 AM
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- Thank you so much, Tom :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 2/15/2020 3:10:00 PM
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How hard the times do make, well done Anne-Lise...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2020 8:58:00 AM
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- Thank you so much, Charlie :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/15/2020 2:28:00 PM
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Very nicely written Ann, hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2020 2:37:00 PM
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- Thank you so much, Joseph :) - // Anne-Lise :)

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