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Daft - Summer Chat

A butterfly, one summer day Spoke to me as he fluttered my way He asked me where the flowers were And told me which he did prefer I pointed where the Zinnias grew He thanked me, and off he flew! As I continued on my walk I wondered, who taught him to talk! -- 10/18/17

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2017 4:08:00 AM

Such a cute poem Joseph:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Smith

Date: 11/18/2017 12:09:00 PM

Congrats Joseph, much enjoyed :)

Roy Pett

Date: 11/18/2017 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Joseph, well written, great imaginative poem. :))

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/18/2017 5:19:00 AM

LOL - whimsical and charming, Joseph - congrats on the win, friend! :-)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/18/2017 3:23:00 AM

Love this imaginative piece, Joseph. Congratulations. // Barry

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/17/2017 9:18:00 PM

Back with congrats! :) xomo

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/24/2017 7:16:00 PM

Oh I loved this one, absolutely great! and a fav for me!

Joseph May
Date: 10/24/2017 9:28:00 PM

Thank you for making a fave Arthur

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2017 7:51:00 PM

FANTASTIC. It's so cute, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 10/24/2017 9:27:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/19/2017 3:13:00 PM

Hi Joseph, I really enjoyed your well written piece. Nice flow with good rhymes. The imagery is good as well. Wouldn't that be something if a butterfly could talk? I love butterflies. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Joseph May
Date: 10/19/2017 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/19/2017 7:45:00 AM

That would be nice, isn't it, having a butterfly to talk to, well written, Joseph:)

Joseph May
Date: 10/19/2017 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Jo

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/18/2017 10:45:00 PM

Awesome :) ya lol'ed me Good luck in the contest xomo!

Joseph May
Date: 10/19/2017 6:23:00 AM

Thank you Maureen