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By No Means

That is nobody’s fault You said, This window was closed from the very beginning But my dear fellow! You could have opened it By means of a Smile!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2018 7:29:00 PM

This is impressive work, your very first post here. Nice to meet you and I hope to see you posting a lot more poems. Try some of the contests and use the themes for inspiration!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/18/2018 2:08:00 PM

Maryam, love the way you expressed ," It could have open with a smile . Hugs Eve ~`*

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/24/2017 5:56:00 AM

I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Maryam

Terry Shuff

Date: 8/30/2017 10:55:00 PM

This poem, turns the action back to the one up set because the window was closed. I like your response to him, very clever and tactful.

Tahira Parveen

Date: 8/28/2017 2:07:00 PM

Very well written Maryam, so true:-) Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/28/2017 8:35:00 AM

Very thoughtful write. Enjoyed. Welcome to poetry soup. Keep write.