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-a Rider's Drumming Tune-

Listen to the muffled padded strumming of hooves beating the ground with a thumping sound, Playing out a galloping tuneful drumming, As rider and horse become one with freedom found. No soulful words are needed to describe that refreshing air, A scene harmonious, of sensing flair With natural musical reflections And throbbing muscular pulsations As rider and horse become one in cause, With pounding echo's, providing the applause, Bridling saddled ovations, to the Lord Father's Outdoors.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/30/2013 10:24:00 AM
Hi Chris, This is a well written piece. I like how you use the words to create authentic sound effect. "hooves beating the ground with a thumping sound".
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Christopher Stopford
Date: 3/30/2013 2:45:00 PM
Thank-You Dear Christine for taking the time, It is your Poems that I find so intriguing and remarkably profound Poetess
Date: 3/29/2013 2:49:00 PM
Chris, I don't ride horses but I like this a lot....David
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Christopher Stopford
Date: 3/29/2013 3:16:00 PM
DAVID I am TRULY honored in that you made time to read my Rhyme, THANK-YOU.
Date: 3/29/2013 10:40:00 AM
What an excellent depiction of horse and rider as one--announciated with sounds, finely in tune with nature. I know you have experienced this. xxx
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Christopher Stopford
Date: 3/29/2013 11:41:00 AM
Dear ,Dear Kim as usual You have captured that exhilarating feeling of Rider as one with that Magnificent Animal called a Horse created to serve man, with a gap in his jaws to take the Bit and no nerve endings in teeth, mane or tail, Thank-You Lord for the Horse.
Date: 3/28/2013 4:14:00 PM
Very good piece. Really enjoy reading your poem.
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Christopher Stopford
Date: 3/29/2013 3:17:00 AM
Thank-you Matthew, for your kind words, At 77 my back-side still has the saddle itch, again thank-you for taking the time.

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