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A Magical Journey

I hold three rocks softly in my hand Rolling them over, and over again This reality I leave far behind Thinking on the time when the rocks did find 'twas at Spewell Bluff where the river bends Where my dream time seemed to never end Dreaming of one stone that changed history Gathered from a brook it is no mystery David placed it in his shepherd's bag From there he surely did not lag Ran on ahead and faced the giant Smooth stone in the sling it is science David released it in the air The Philistine giant tumbled down there God guided that stone like a missile

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Date: 11/17/2009 5:52:00 AM
inspirational, enjoyed reading.
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Date: 11/16/2009 1:19:00 PM
Very nice interpretation of this contest. I am sure it will be in the winner's circle. Thanks for reading and your kind comments. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:05:00 AM
A perfect poem for the contest and a unique and precious theme of faith... it is a winner already... happy u enjoyed my awesome thoughts.. hope many have responded to this wonderful idea... happy Monday... luv .. and thankxxx for your support and encouragement always... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/15/2009 6:47:00 PM
Great visual in this Sara. Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Keep writing, smile. Love Light Patty, PS Hope you're entering this in the contest!
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Date: 11/15/2009 5:48:00 PM
you have soup mail
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Date: 11/15/2009 2:11:00 PM
Stones are magical and personal. No one is like another. I used to collect them and still have some from different countries and continents. Have a wonderful week... Gert
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