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WHEN STATURE IS A FORM OF GRACE Red hair, skin sweet apple, Her face like a geisha quiet yet armed with falcon eyes You'll see. His nose: sharp like a knife. Alone, she has no friend, was this the way she's meant to be shadowed? Lonely with hurt anew she sighs deep like furnace with only a dolesome ballad to sing. For she was different, demure in every way, stature becomes a form of grace within. She chafe folks that bore her, their slanderous tongues. Have they no grace nor some respect to care? Actions where life pulsates demands each to play roles yet still, when silence roars, hear echoes. Truth ~ lies all mixed in one, baffling the people, leading the narrow minds astray, wonky! __________________________________________________ Inspired by: Theater by Mary Cassatte 1879 __Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__ 4:26 pm, January 19, 2015

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Date: 2/4/2016 1:30:00 PM
Nice take on the painting Olive. Golly, another one that's a toughie to write about, well done little one ~ James xx
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:45:00 PM
This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.
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Date: 1/21/2016 7:56:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work. If for a contest, reads like a winner. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:09:00 PM
thanks much Sara.. =`) im glad you like it.. =`)
Date: 1/19/2016 7:43:00 AM
- Fantastic ..... enchanting - A wonderful poem, dear Olive - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2016 1:46:00 AM
thanks much Anne Lise im so pleased you see this wonderful... :) !
Date: 1/19/2016 5:14:00 AM
Olive you have given me something to seek with this work...Mary Cassatte. I will have to look up the inspiration for the mesmerizing words you have put down. Great write!
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Date: 1/29/2016 3:17:00 AM
Thanks much Dan.. =`)

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