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- Two Stars Sparkle As One Soul -

They whisper their sonnets and surrender their thrones gracefully Consuming tunes sweetly echoing and crowning a heart with love Your gentle words, your tender touch, so much divine beauty as Our two stars sparkle as one soul with one golden smile of eternity When the sun rises in the east and the sun sets in the west we know While looking upon a dream holding the deepest vision awestruck The new sun across the sky passes so the soul can reach its destiny And you vanquished all doubts of me burning as one flame on fire Knowing the winds in Heaven mix forever in a powerful divine glory With one angel standing before our eyes as destiny sparks its promise That in God’s way it must be the message of love we feel so strongly Embracing forever the alchemy of two stars blazing hot with emotion Dreams and fantasies merge with this wonderful bliss ever so gently As faraway rising is your sunshine holding hands warmly as a regal gift And a truth filled with blessing, deeply peaceful and complete as we pray Under a bridge of hope with colors kissing the heart and soul of a dream Love and devotion pervade our eternal desire of oneness with the Lord God As His heavenly guard ushers our souls together with purpose before Him And as a choir of angels sing their majestic paeans honoring this moment We see now our dreams melding as one as our two stars sparkle as one soul Anne-Lise Andresen, Liam McDaid, and Gary Bateman – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved – June 11, 2015 (Unrhymed Quatrain)

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Date: 6/22/2015 2:03:00 PM
dazzling display of agape done with much affection, liam... great collab.. how are you? huggs
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Date: 6/22/2015 6:29:00 AM
There is unity in the melding of your words. The thought is never lost as you write with such cohesion. The last verse is a perfect conclusion. congratulations, Anne, Liam and Gary! A 7. Hugs to all of you! Kim
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Date: 6/19/2015 4:36:00 PM
A very good chemistry indeed !
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Date: 6/18/2015 11:45:00 AM
- I do not know how many times I've read this poem .... but, it is just as beautiful every time :) - thank my friends - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2015 9:02:00 AM
Hi Liam Anne-Lise n' Gary!Another very beautiful and captivating love poem filled with wonderful hopes and dreams penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Great imagery!Awesome collaboration between the three of you.A very sweet romantic dreamy piece to keep very close to my heart.smiling.A real gem!So very beautiful.I enjoyed it.A 7+++to each.A fav.Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 6/18/2015 8:05:00 AM
What can I say Liam Mate that I haven't already said: "It's been an honor and pleasure working with you and dear Anne-Lise on this wonderful Quatrain write. I hope there will be many more co-writes between us in the future. This is a fascinating poem!! Best Always, Gary
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