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Dear mother nature you're supposed to make the world a good place to be in Today the sky had hues of orange Life begins every day when the sun arises Mixed with the fire's toast drinking of daylight Nature's wonderful respect for darkness A moon shared the sky And you will never feel disappointed To be born again off you with the sun setting Dipping down golden over mountains Like a soul lost awaiting to be found A slim narrow smile pearly shines Awaiting with anticipation Night closing in as twilight holds a dream The master's at work the divinity of a deity Whispers of a breeze through fir trees Rusting branches sway dancing freely Surely created a deep impression inside me Life begins every day when the sun takes center stage A sharp cutting breath hits home Diamond cutting thoughts invade Sailing away into another world The moon and the stars come out in full force Sharing a daydream as the night closes in Your eyes carry the sun peaking through the clouds Destiny living and breathing the same air Until bliss becomes your daily drink Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid A Collaborated Poem 18.10.2015

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Date: 11/6/2015 9:14:00 AM
Both you have painted a beautiful picture of the mother nature. A fine art like it's. Sure 7 again sure. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2015 12:38:00 PM
- Thanks Bl, for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2015 5:56:00 AM
Another appealing collaboration from you and Liam. Your pens bring your respect for nature and life to brilliant light.
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Date: 11/6/2015 12:38:00 PM
- Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/22/2015 4:58:00 AM
epic write! Talented poet with words that flow like a waterfall :)
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Date: 10/22/2015 6:41:00 AM
- James, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2015 2:10:00 PM
also i would like to thank everyone for the heartfelt really beautiful comments wishing you all a blessed week deeply appreciated
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 2:17:00 PM
- Yes, many beautiful comments !!!
Date: 10/21/2015 2:07:00 PM
truly a great pleasure writing this with you anne lise congratulations dear friend passing you a warm smile thank you deeply pal
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 2:18:00 PM
- Always a pleasure, dear friend Liam :)
Date: 10/21/2015 6:26:00 AM
I thought I already commented on this, Anne. I see that it was Liam's. A pleasure to read once again. Really happy that this won the POTD. hugs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 11:12:00 AM
- I know you meant that :)) - hugs and smile :)))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 7:44:00 AM
.......... Liam`s and me :)) .... thanks for the second time reading, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2015 2:44:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. A beautiful collaboration of nature. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 2:59:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2015 10:57:00 AM
You find the beauty oftenl hidden from the eyes of most people and you buff it up so that it shines for all to see. Emile.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 2:50:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2015 7:31:00 AM
Lovely poem my friends. Nature and its wonders awe those that have eyes and minds to see. A7
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:50:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, a 7 and friendly visit, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2015 12:52:00 AM
beautiful thoughts from both of you, anne...delightful collab, wow.. happy days and huggs
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:49:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2015 10:16:00 PM
Lovely, Sunshine. The two of you breath hope and beauty into the lines. :) It's nice that you can collaborate together on these pieces. Hugs
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:49:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2015 6:02:00 PM
There are some beautiful patterns in nature, and it is not surprising that we are synchronized to the sun. I don't know how people way north or way south deal with such long days and nights. I guess it's all beautiful in its own way. Life is a beautiful gift. I will be somewhat sorry when it does end for me--hopefully not too soon.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 2:51:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Duke - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2015 4:57:00 PM
Hi Anne lise A beautiful collaboration of nature. My compliments.
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:48:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Ralph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2015 4:29:00 PM
You two are at it again...lovely
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:48:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2015 2:34:00 PM
as my eyes consume your Beautiful words....all needs neatly entertain thoughts undisturbed....a.n.n.e.'s uninterrupted mind is the process of Beauty....and telling you that is my honorable duty....;)
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:48:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Eric - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2015 8:29:00 AM
Your collaboration is a source of delightful and inspiring poetry that fills our hearts and souls with joy! A seven to both of you, Anne Lise and Liam!,
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:47:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, a 7 and friendly visit, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2015 12:12:00 AM
The world we live in may not be perfect, but there is still so much in it to enjoy... This is a really beautiful and inspiring poem. Very nicely penned, Anne-Lise and Liam!
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:47:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Kelly - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2015 8:00:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!Another very beautiful,passionate, captivating, n' sweet poem inspired by love, Mother nature,and all,that you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very enchanting!I love it!Just great!So very beautifully written.A most beautiful,captivating, n' sweet love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I truly enjoy it!Very magical.Just awesome!Superb imagery!Excellent collaboration! Wonderful piece!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 +++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 2:46:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, 7 and friendly visit, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:45:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2015 7:48:00 PM
another great collaboration, you two. I love the way you ended it with the time that bliss will become your daily drink. Such a hopeful positive poem.
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:46:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2015 4:56:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! A most wonderful collaborated write here. Mother Nature with all of Her splendor and grandeur is always a great theme to write about. Enjoyed the message of this excellent poem immensely. ("TR" + "FAV") Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:44:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments, tr, + fav. and friendly visit, Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2015 4:21:00 PM
This is a very great write friend. I love how you conveyed this beautiful piece. That is always you. Excellent write dear poet............A.M.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2015 1:57:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2015 3:36:00 PM
Clever thoughts written by both. Enjoyed reading Anne Lise thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/19/2015 1:56:00 PM
- Michael, tanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2015 1:35:00 PM
I am graced with the read,a fantastic collaborated poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit Miraj - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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