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many waters cannot quench love 

neither can the floods drown it 

song of Solomon 

As the winds breathe heavily darkened within fury Moaning filled with clouds begins speaking Through stormy turbulent assaults with waves that kill A ballad is blown away like feathers from angels wings Rain falling heavily driven by natures unyielding force Trees bend to salute the host's almighty anger Hurricane's orchestra romancing chaos turns Striking tempest flashing lightening power of creation speaks Rumbling voices roaring echoes carried from the heaven's The action and power of love both earthly and heavenly Crackling forks sparking separating inside an air like music dawns Floods flow down a neck chain around the mountain's face Rushing to an ocean's source where it's kissed by the salt of grace Washed in a seabed finding her resting place safe inside an oyster Enormous waves sad and monotonous, which eventually dies A collaborated poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 14.09. 2017 tristich unrhymed Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/20/2017 2:45:00 PM
- Sorry I have not seen you have posted this, dear Liam - Many thanks for beautiful poems and your wonderful cooperation :) - Best wishes love and peace - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2017 2:47:00 PM
- Glad you liked; song of Solomon :)
Date: 9/16/2017 4:48:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! I also read and commented earlier on this marvelous write by you and Anne-Lise, when she posted it. Very Excellent Work -- and very powerful imagery. This write is full of poetic grace my very good friend!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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