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Seagulls Sip the Morning Sunshine

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Beneath blue, cloudless, endless, blissful line; briny breeze filled sea along the coastline, squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine changeful flight swooping from azure confine. Beneath blue, cloudless, endless, blissful line dance above ever-changing rippling waves, squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine up and down floating sails towards shore raves. Dance above ever-changing rippling waves on fish, crab, anything that moves. Nestling up and down floating sails towards shore raves on brown seaweed, midst rocky isle waiting. On fish, crab, anything that moves; nestling squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine on brown seaweed, midst rocky isle waiting, beneath blue, cloudless, endless, blissful line. 11/22/2019 example for contest... I used the poem "Seagull" and modified a little for the example https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/seagull_1188175

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Date: 11/24/2019 10:59:00 AM
Very well written. Lovely. Imagery is excellent. Ann
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Date: 11/23/2019 7:52:00 AM
wow great imagery.. so many great lines here....
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