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pity, sorrow, sensitive, delicate, fragile, soft

Love filled nights and petty fights How could she be so blind, to be left behind Will you understand ... the pain He left her without saying goodbye If she could only turn back time Will you understand ... the numbness She's the broken wings of a dove No reason left to fight anymore Will you understand ... her loneliness 08.05-2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Carole Duet

Date: 6/23/2017 4:20:00 PM

A great little poem, Anne Lisa. So realistic.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/23/2017 4:22:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Carole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dean Wood

Date: 5/11/2017 7:52:00 PM

Oh, I hope this is not your pain.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2017 3:18:00 AM

- "She" feel the pain ...not me, Dean :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/11/2017 12:09:00 PM

Thinking of this piece with a Nurse's pain score in mind, I give it an 8/10. Brings tears to your eyes. Happy International Nurse's Day. I'm doing nights so will sleep through a whole big chunk of it. Enjoy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2017 3:16:00 AM

- Happy International Nurse's Day, to you too Scott :) - Hope you got a peaceful night - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/11/2017 10:40:00 AM

A pain of cool volcanic cyclone of madness is sustained only in such a heartbreaking moments. The bearer knows the exact feeling what is that. Extreme beauty in expression my lovely dear friend. A great 7. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2017 3:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol B.

Date: 5/11/2017 7:27:00 AM

So sad you feel her pain. Great write :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2017 7:30:00 AM

- "She" feel the pain, Carol - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/10/2017 4:33:00 PM

I can feel and picture the sadness . You portrayed the feelings so well in this piece. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2017 2:12:00 AM

- Phyllis, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 5/10/2017 3:29:00 AM

Its never happened to me Anne-Lise, but I do understand pain like this having comforted many a friend in need. Wonderful in its sadness. A7++ Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2017 1:58:00 PM

- Thanks for the great comments a 7 and lovely visits, my friend Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2017 7:28:00 PM

Beautiful :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2017 1:57:00 PM

- Eve, thank you for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2017 5:55:00 PM

I liked your poem and the way it portrayed the lovely picture, Anne Lise. WEll done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2017 1:56:00 PM

- Thank you Andrea, for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 5/9/2017 4:14:00 PM

Such a sad piece, Anne-Lisa. Hopefully this dove's wings will mend in time! All the best, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2017 1:55:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/9/2017 2:41:00 PM

Oh, my dear...How this touched me. Beautiful piece. It takes a person with a large heart to be able to understand. Loved this poem, dear. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2017 1:55:00 PM

- Dear Eileen, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/9/2017 2:21:00 PM

Quite the opposite of your pen name but so well done Anne-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:27:00 PM

- My poems is seldom about myself, Charlie - But, I do not always smile :) - Thank you for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/9/2017 12:26:00 PM

Hi Anne , beautiful write , there are a lot of users in this world , we all must learn to seek the givers in life they are the rare breed :)) lots of hugs and sunshine smiles :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:28:00 PM

- So true, Niall - Thank you for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/9/2017 7:20:00 AM

Broken hearts lead to sadness...Very nicely penned Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:29:00 PM

- Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/9/2017 5:59:00 AM

Your writing has turned sadness into a pleasant reading my friend, Anne-Lise! A 7! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:35:00 PM

- Thanks for the great friendly comments a 7 and lovely visits, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/9/2017 5:54:00 AM

Dear Anne Good Morning. My goodness the expression and the emotive factor are so ever present. You have wonderfully perfectly and gracefully stated this situation and state of mind of the one left behind and the one in pain. Allow me to say you also have a message of worth because far often than not people do not see or hear or yes understand. Take your bow. Have a wonderful morning and day. Well done entirely.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:34:00 PM

- Dear Lisa, thank you for the wonderful friendly comments and enjoyable visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/9/2017 5:13:00 AM

Yes I would... A pinch of sadness but so beautiful, Anne-Lise... Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:32:00 PM

- Akkina, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/9/2017 12:00:00 AM

Excellent and sad poem of lost love. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:32:00 PM

- Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/8/2017 11:11:00 PM

Such sadness and beauty in a poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/8/2017 7:31:00 PM

Touchy light sad poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:30:00 PM

- Abdullah, thank you for your nice visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/8/2017 5:54:00 PM

so sad but such a true depiction of pain, anne-lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:29:00 PM

- Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2017 5:33:00 PM

I think many can relate to the heartbreak you express so vividly Anne-lise:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 2:29:00 PM

- Thank you for your nice visits and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/8/2017 5:27:00 PM

Well expressed poem. The reader can feel it fully !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 4:03:00 AM

- Glad you enjoyed it, Heidi :) - Thanks for visit and your comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/8/2017 2:23:00 PM

I agree with Tim below, the sadness in this piece is pouring out on the page my friend. Wow, this was sadly beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 3:59:00 AM

- Chris, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/8/2017 2:17:00 PM

The sadness overcomes this piece but is so well written...a fav

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2017 3:59:00 AM

- Glad you enjoyed it,Tim :) - Thanks for visit a fav. and your comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)