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The kingdom of the unknown I see it clearly Tears for suffering Crying for the lost blood The pain Lightning as flashes I'm falling deep My soul becomes stretched Burning pain The shades of blue I'm sorry I will never show you my scars 20.07.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/4/2018 3:47:00 AM

We "never show our scars" we pen them into words, a puff of relief, a sigh of healing.. we elevate them into beauty.. a beautiful piece of art though dipped into pain! Be blessed always dear Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2018 12:46:00 AM

- A big thank you for your visit and your comment, Besma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kishan Sharma

Date: 9/3/2018 10:20:00 PM

Nice one

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2018 12:46:00 AM

- A big thank you for your visit and your comment, Kishan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Karen Da

Date: 8/21/2018 12:55:00 AM

Powerful and brave. Your poetic expression is superb..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2018 7:26:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Karen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 8/4/2018 8:48:00 AM

Scars are the road map that defines us. They help to make us who we are. Although difficult, I believe they should be shared, if only with those who are closest to us, and we should not be ashamed of them. A very meaningful write Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:21:00 AM

- Many thanks, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/1/2018 5:43:00 PM

deep write, Anne- Lise enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:21:00 AM

- Many thanks, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/31/2018 9:22:00 AM

Ahh, it is such a deep and lovely poem, it has truly touch my heart, good luck and have a really nice day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:20:00 AM

- Many thanks, Faraz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/29/2018 9:13:00 PM

You my friend have delivered a powerful message in this great poem. In how some survive to live a greater life and find peace and love.. A fav...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:20:00 AM

- Many thanks, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/29/2018 1:35:00 PM

anne, missing you.. happy huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:20:00 AM

- Many thanks, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robertina B.

Date: 7/28/2018 9:27:00 AM

Powerful words ... Deep and profound, Anne Lise .. Absolutely wonderful!! Blessings!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:19:00 AM

- Many thanks, Robertina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/27/2018 7:51:00 AM

pressure to the brain....inspiration that is unattained....failure at a goal....damnation of the Soul....there are so many things that hurt....but with True Love, no pain can really work....wonderful write anne….as always....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:19:00 AM

- Many thanks, Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/26/2018 11:56:00 PM

I feel every bit of your words my dearest Anne-Lise. Deep, sad but magnificent work. Thanks for the lovely read and for visiting some of my posts last time. I also came here to bring you all my best wishes in your life esp for your birthday. Belated Very Happy Birthday! Sorry, so late. I wasn't home & was in rough course of life. But, I hope and pray, you did had a great and wonderful time. God bless you always. Lots of lovely hugs from me.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:24:00 AM

- Dear Leonora, many thanks ... so lovely of you ...always remember my birthday :) - hugs & love // Anne-Lise :)

Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 7/26/2018 11:16:00 PM

A heartfelt poem…..brilliantly penned, Anne-Lise. All the best!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:19:00 AM

- Many thanks, Irfanulla :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 7/26/2018 4:22:00 PM

Anne-Lise , you are a master of words and truly poetic. / Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:18:00 AM

- Many thanks, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/25/2018 8:23:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise : The beautiful sadness of this poem pulsates with every word! Please accept an Italian hug.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:18:00 AM

- Many thanks, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/23/2018 8:20:00 AM

Nicely done Anne-Lise...a sad write for you...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:17:00 AM

- Many thanks, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 7/23/2018 6:09:00 AM

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your beautifully written couplets Anne-Lise, I could feel the sadness as I read this, well written. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2018 4:16:00 AM

- Many thanks, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/22/2018 5:47:00 PM

This is an incredible piece Anne-Lise! Deep and raw emotions. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:06:00 AM

- Many thanks Connie, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/22/2018 5:39:00 PM

I am so proud to be in your company, well done Anne-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:05:00 AM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/22/2018 2:56:00 PM

Your first line says it all for me, Anne-Lise, powerful poem, that takes one deep..somehow i relate to this, if not fiction, your not alone..love the poetry though.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:05:00 AM

- Thank you so much Harry, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/22/2018 2:03:00 AM

Deep, raw piece, Anne-Lise. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:04:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the fine feedback, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/21/2018 12:15:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, A very riveting and heartfelt write here!! For me, each of your sequential couplets bring numerous images to my mind. Given the historic and present-day cruelty in our world today, many images abound worldwide of people (adults and children) who have had tremendous pain inflicted on them and other intolerable actions committed against them both in spirit and in body. A very poignant couplet write. Your last couplet says it all!! A FAVE!! Best Weekend Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:03:00 AM

- Hello Gary, many thanks for friendly visits, a fav. and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/21/2018 11:09:00 AM

Powerful write, Anne- Lise. That last line is the dagger.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:01:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/21/2018 3:13:00 AM

Catharsis through pain dearest, Anne-Lise. Masterfully done. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:01:00 AM

- Many thanks Demetrios, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/21/2018 1:44:00 AM

Ok so thats so heart felt, but I will tell you, I would see every scare as beauty both inside and out, because thats how you shine, as a beautiful woman!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 1:00:00 AM

- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/20/2018 10:57:00 PM

Anne-Lise, the depth of poignancy in your moving poem reaches in and grabs my heart with its powerful yet delicate expression. Superb emotional poetry that is felt rather than just read. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2018 12:59:00 AM

- Thank you very much for the fine feedback, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)