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Aware ..... Did someone see My butt is sore Did someone see Now I'm sure both yellow and blue Did someone see I look around quickly Did someone see I wish I could shout loud Did someone see I get up in a hurry Did someone see I wet my butt Did someone see 18.01.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/19/2013 6:12:00 PM

lol, I've been in this position before, good poem about ice Anne Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2013 1:32:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Sheri. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Gail Debole

Date: 1/30/2013 7:02:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise - I can relate to this, and can sense the embarrassment you felt and self-control you displayed when this happened to you. I joined the falling down club a long time ago. Once again, you have written an emotionally honest poem. - Much love, Gail

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/30/2013 10:01:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Gail. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/23/2013 10:29:00 AM

Lovely imagination penned quite nice. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2013 10:31:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, bl. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/22/2013 10:28:00 AM

hahahaha..I picture myself before in your poem my dear friend Ann Lise (^__^). first time to do the ice skating and Its really hurt my butt for days..great poem from a great poet like you :) Hugs, Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2013 11:56:00 AM

Yes, it is painful to sit on your butt after a fall on the ice for days Maria. - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Joseph May

Date: 1/22/2013 9:50:00 AM

nice write Anne...were you skating at the time?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2013 11:53:00 AM

No this is when the streets are full of ice in winter time Joseph. - Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 1/22/2013 8:17:00 AM

This is an excellent poem with an excellent image, too my dear friend Anne-Lise. Reading it gives me a great and wonderful vicarious experience on ice. Hope I can have a first hand experience someday. It's so fun I'm sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comments on my latest poem! Have a blessed day to you and your family always! love and hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2013 11:49:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Leonora. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2013 3:20:00 PM

Ut oh..you fell down? Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2013 1:56:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Debbie. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/21/2013 12:57:00 PM

So nice to return and grab a smile from your work as always... Be patient with me it will take some time to catch up... hugs n luv Michael

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2013 1:04:00 PM

Take the time you need ....... :) Thanks for your comments and your visit, Michael. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

The Situation

Date: 1/21/2013 11:43:00 AM

The worries that women have.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2013 11:46:00 AM

Maybe it is a "woman thing" ........ men do not care (?) Thanks for your comments and your visit, T.S.. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/21/2013 11:31:00 AM

Had me chuckling because once I took a fall on a busy street and the contents of my purse flew all over. Many people stopped and I quickly got us as fast as I could and wondered if my butt was wet from the snow. It is natural to get up right away so thank goodness nothing was broken. Nicely done. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2013 11:35:00 AM

As an adult, it's so embarrassing...... Thanks for your comments and your visit, Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/21/2013 10:49:00 AM

Absolutely charming! For the first 10 or 12 years of my life, I practically lived on skates... I miss those carefree days! Loved your poem... hugs and much love! xox

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2013 11:01:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Amii James

Date: 1/21/2013 4:40:00 AM

Really liked this, it's so funny and creative. And it really captures the essence of winter time:) xxxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2013 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Amii. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/20/2013 1:06:00 PM

Love the repetition of those lines....really shows the depth of concern for being seen at your worst by others! You made me smile! Great before I go to bed! Hugs! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2013 1:08:00 PM

Good night and thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 1/20/2013 9:06:00 AM

Dear Anne Lise...what a lovely poem...thank you my sweet poetess for your great sharing... enjoyed so much <3 <3 <3 luv and big hugs ..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2013 12:12:00 PM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Husna Mirza

Date: 1/20/2013 3:43:00 AM

Dear Anne, Thank You very much for your kind compliment! And yes I love P soup! I think your poems are lovely and you're A great poet! Husna

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2013 5:16:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Husna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/19/2013 11:51:00 PM

wow. how unfortunate yet it's a good poem - PJ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2013 3:18:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, JH. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/19/2013 6:48:00 PM

Haha, too funny, Anne-Lise! I did see. Just kidding. Glad you didn't hurt yourself. It's the winter over there but it is sunny and in the 60's here. Great write!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2013 3:19:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Toquyen. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2013 2:42:00 PM

Oh yes this brings back memories,, just love this!!!!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 4:04:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Harry. -

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2013 2:24:00 PM

I hope that not you but based on what happens when one gets on thin ice..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 4:03:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Sara. -

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/19/2013 9:10:00 AM

I like this Anne Lise. No I did not see. You are safe with me. thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 10:18:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, my friend Lucilla. -

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/19/2013 8:01:00 AM

Dear Anne, You ask the question : Did someone see? My answer is... I wish I were able to see…ha-ha. Love it! Have a nice weekend. Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 10:17:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Demetrios. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 1/19/2013 7:18:00 AM

Anne-Lise hope it's not true, we have lots of snow at the moment and I HATE SNOW...how is Arild?...have a peaceful weekend ...David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 7:25:00 AM

- Arild it just fine. - - Give me 6 months of spring + 6 months of summer !! :) :) :) - Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, David.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 11:00:00 PM

hahaha, I know this feeling from when I was a young'un!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 5:54:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Andrea. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/18/2013 7:06:00 PM

This is cute, Anne Lise! I can picture you looking around to see if anyone had seen you fall. Thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. I appreciate you taking your time to read them. Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Kim. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 1/18/2013 4:22:00 PM

I see! I see! gotcha! Hehehe, hilarious penned Anne, I just remember my old memory, i think worse than you are, I got slipped in the crowd and fell right on the wet mud, can you imagine how dirty was my jeans at that time and the shame that I've got? :p hehehe, i really enjoyed the freshness of your poetry today, have a wonderful weekend Anne - hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Yanny. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)