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The sunshine climbs up the rooted ladder smelling the midsummer umber sentinels, that stand tunnel watch over later comers shushing the interrupted lull wild that have succumbed to slumber. Scented mumbling of dawn's spiral seraph rose pink of light lumbers. 6/7/2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/18/2018 11:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win. Well written with awesome imagery and excellent rhyme.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 10:14:00 AM

This is exactly the kind of poem Silent ONe enjoys, so I can see how it placed high. I love the use of alliteration for your beautiful imagery. Congrats on win.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2018 1:56:00 AM

Sensual imagery, rhyme and a sprinkling of alliteration are the main ingredients of this beautiful poem, Eve. Congratulations on placing first!! Hugs // paul

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/14/2018 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Eve! Janice

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/13/2018 12:53:00 PM

Wonderful write, Eve!:-) Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:30:00 PM

Thank you, Edward...Hugs Eve ~’*

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/13/2018 10:24:00 AM

"...rose pink of light lumbers." This phrase and so many others constitute innovative, imaginative imagery, so richly deserving of a first-place trophy. Congrats, Eve! :) gw

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:29:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon, for such inspiring visit..Hugs Eve ~’*

Roy Pett

Date: 6/13/2018 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, beautiful poetry, so well written. :))

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Roy..Hugs Eve ~’*

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/13/2018 9:59:00 AM

A treasure, every word, nature personified, rose pink, the light you've shone, a radiance you've shared in your poem. Congratulations on your win Eve. Mick

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Mick, you are so very kind.Hugs Eve ~’*

Natasha Turner

Date: 6/13/2018 7:40:00 AM

Wow..so mystical and beautiful. Well done dear :)

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Natasha for the kind words....Hugs Eve ~’*

Fauxcroft Wade

Date: 6/13/2018 7:35:00 AM

Great piece congrats on your win. Faux

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:27:00 PM

Thank you, Faux..Hugs Eve ~’*

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/13/2018 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations for your 1st place win Eve :)

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:27:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi for the congratulations and your return visit....Hugs Eve ~’*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2018 7:15:00 AM

- Congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:26:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine....Hugs Eve ~’*

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/13/2018 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations Eve. Tom.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:26:00 PM

Thank you, Tom ..Hugs Eve ~’*

John Gondolf

Date: 6/13/2018 7:02:00 AM

You paint a very lovely picture with your words, Eve, congrats on your well deserved win. John

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:25:00 PM

Thank you, John, for your kind words..Hugs Eve ~’*

Silent One

Date: 6/13/2018 6:55:00 AM

Four excellent poetic lines with awesome imagery and of course great rhyme Eve.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:25:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One for my win....Hugs Eve ~’*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2018 5:36:00 PM

very inventive, Eve. I love the many textures of this one. This is not judged yet, is it? I wonder why!!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:24:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea...Hugs Eve ~’*

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/12/2018 6:01:00 AM

Beautiful Eve. I enjoyed this!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:24:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi....Hugs Eve ~’*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/9/2018 9:04:00 PM

This is very lovely Eve. I can almost smell the scent of the trees! : )

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Connie,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/9/2018 1:56:00 PM

Nicely done...

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:22:00 PM

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:21:00 PM

Thank you, Pashang,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/8/2018 5:29:00 PM

You met the challenge well, Eve. Each natural word blending into a poetic elixir!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, Ralph,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2018 1:43:00 PM

ohh, vivid display of imagery, eve... your artistry shines..huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, Nette,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/8/2018 5:18:00 AM

It s a a really deep and lovely poem, good luck in the contest

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, Faraz,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2018 4:14:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/8/2018 3:11:00 AM

Impressive imagery dearest, Eve. Good luck

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:15:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2018 12:31:00 AM

A great four liner Eve, them redwood's look awesome, lovely pic to accompany it. Good luck. Tom.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2018 8:15:00 PM

Thank you, Tom,,Hugs Eve ~’*