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- It Is Boring -

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- It Is Boring -

Freezing ...
in my bones
Purple fingers and toes
Twenty-eight finger bones X two
Twenty-eight toe bones X two
A large base with pain
Stiffness, can not be bent
Six hundred muscle cells
will not cooperate with the brain

Next minute;

Burning heat
Reading glasses ... fogging
Drops of sweat in the forehead
Red fingers and toes
The eyes sting
The letters doubles
Throat dry and sore
Cough that feels suffocating
Rib bones turned inside out
like an umbrella in storm

Feel ;

Trapped ... need oxygen
Parts of the motor nerve fiber
out of balance
The body feels ...
as a old donkey                                                                                                .
I have no patience                                                                                     .
to have the flu ... it's boring                                                                .
"Flue" mean fly on Norwegian                                                         .
A fly buzzing in the window frame                                               .
                                                                                          .
       .... let me out ...(!)   .                                         .
               ... it's spring          .          .           .           .
                                                  .
                                                









02.04.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 4/23/2017 5:26:00 PM
Hi Anne , great write , ' rib bones turned inside out ' :)) hugs
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Date: 4/24/2017 1:16:00 PM
- Thank you for visit and comments, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2017 4:06:00 PM
I have just recovered after three weeks of it Anne-Lise. It's good to feel well again, as I hope you do too.
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Date: 4/6/2017 3:52:00 AM
- Three weeks ... I had gone crazy ... glad you has recovered - One week is enough for me :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2017 2:09:00 PM
So helpful...and supportive of people in your poetic, creative and humane way. Sending hugs your way...
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Date: 4/5/2017 2:29:00 PM
- Hugging with flu ... not a good idea, Gail :))) - Greatly appreciated your visit and comments, thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2017 8:43:00 AM
You write great verses even when sick with the flu! And yes, flu is tough on me if/when I get it. Have been lucky this year.. Finely crafted and very descriptive verses.. Super 10 my friend..
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Date: 4/5/2017 1:25:00 PM
- Crossing my fingers for you, Richard ... flu sucks ! - Greatly appreciated your visit and comments, thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2017 12:48:00 PM
Aw, I feel for you, Anne-Lise. Your poem reminded me of my recent bout w/the flu. You expressed quite accurately the way the body feels going thru that ordeal. Sick poem (black slang for good). Ha ha ha. Love you lady, wishing you a speedy recovery.
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Date: 4/5/2017 1:22:00 PM
- The body feels destroyed ... need rest ... a week ... - I do not like"resting" during the day when the sun shines ...it's boring :) - Thank you for visit and comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2017 6:58:00 AM
After I got through laughing at the picture, I finally got to read the poem. Your poem gave me a runny nose :) just kidding, when I'm sick I can't write because I'm way to miserable. At least you can have some fun with it.
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:20:00 PM
- Sorry your runny nose, James :) - Greatly appreciated your visit and comments, thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2017 5:55:00 AM
Oh... I pray for your speedy recovery... Get well soon Anne... BTW marvellous poem ...A big 7....
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:22:00 PM
- Thank you for prayer and blessing, Supraja :) - I'm doing fine ... a little better every day :) - Thank you for visit a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2017 2:08:00 AM
It seems that your Muse collaborates fine with your the flue so as you to write such a marvel of a poem dearest, Anne-Lise! Fantastic my dearest, ! wish you, once again, a speedy recovery! A 7 and many hugs!
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:25:00 PM
- Thanks for the warm words and thoughts, my friend - And, thank you for visit a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 5:20:00 PM
I wish you a swift recovery but must tell you that your poem was quite entertaining :) Amitiés
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:26:00 PM
- Anne-Marie, thank you for visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 5:12:00 PM
Oh I wish you the warmth and healing of Spring sooooon Ann-Lise :-) Your poem is lovely writing, your words describe the symptoms so well. What a cute pic.! 7 I send happy thoughts and smiles to you :-) lynnxxx
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:28:00 PM
- Lynn, thanks for the warm words and happy thoughts ... and a 7 on my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 4:57:00 PM
I hope you feel better soon, I just had it, loved the poem and photo was so cute!!
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:30:00 PM
- Seven years until the next time ... it say ... we'll see, Arthur - Thank you for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 4:12:00 PM
Sounds awful Anne-Lise, hope you feel better soon, well written, Roy. :(
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:31:00 PM
- A little better every day, Roy :) - Thank you for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 1:53:00 PM
superb!... may spring fin you well, dear anne..happy huggs
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:32:00 PM
- Thank you Nette, for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 11:06:00 AM
Hope you are better soon
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Date: 4/2/2017 12:22:00 PM
- Thanks so much, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 10:45:00 AM
OOops forgot the 7
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Date: 4/2/2017 12:22:00 PM
:)
Date: 4/2/2017 10:32:00 AM
Poor Sunshine. What a time to get the flu. A bit late in the season but then up North, you have to expect it. Great thoughts. a 7 and a big hug//Victor
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Date: 4/2/2017 12:29:00 PM
- It's flu time across the country this time of year, Victor - No big deal ... this time it was my turn - No hugging it is very contagious :) - only // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2017 10:21:00 AM
Very nice ink
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Date: 4/2/2017 12:21:00 PM
- Thanks so much, S.C. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)