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With the pen of the demon ... Only the devil and dragons can breathe out smoke of mouth and nose Separate yourself from the dark ... and show your face 16/11- 2017 28 WORD PIC MOTIFS - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 3/5/2018 2:39:00 AM
Darkness, true evil, very seldom shows it's face - because it is a spineless coward. I get this poem. Short verse, powerful.
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Date: 3/5/2018 2:48:00 AM
- Always faceless, Leanne - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/27/2017 12:51:00 PM
so rich write up!
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Date: 1/22/2018 2:56:00 PM
- Thank you, Nilima :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2017 9:24:00 PM
A chilling write that was destined for a top win Anne-Lise! Your poem goes d o well with the picture. Big congratulations! : )
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Date: 11/22/2017 1:58:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2017 4:51:00 PM
Sun, oh so deep and dark, congratulations on your win in the contest !
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Date: 11/22/2017 1:58:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2017 1:27:00 PM
Come to light and stay away from the dark. Nicely done Anne Lise. love phyl
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:15:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2017 11:59:00 PM
GREAT job Anne-Lise. I like where you took this, and congrats on the win
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:23:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2017 11:59:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Sunshine :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:24:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2017 9:57:00 PM
I like the command in this feisty little poem. Congrats on your win, Anne.
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:23:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Afzal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2017 4:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win Anne
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:22:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2017 3:09:00 PM
ohh, anne... a daring, astounding poem which deserves a sure win; i like how you ended this... finest congrats and thanks for gracing this challenge
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Date: 11/21/2017 2:25:00 AM
- Nice to participate, thanks for my 3rd place in your contest Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2017 1:28:00 PM
Sunshine, you selected a dark and evil image to write on and you wrote a fantastic poem, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/20/2017 1:30:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2017 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations right back at you Anne-Lise. This one is dark but brilliant.
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Date: 11/20/2017 1:17:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2017 2:26:00 PM
Oh I love this dark piece. It's thrilling! Good luck in the contest my dear... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/19/2017 2:43:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - Always nice to see you, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2017 1:20:00 PM
Nicely mysterious interpretation of the theme, Anne-Lise! Good luck with the contest! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/19/2017 2:41:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2017 4:45:00 AM
Such a great imagery Anne... Reads like a winner... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:30:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and commemt, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2017 12:12:00 AM
Dark and gothic, I am intrigued . You have put such imagery in this Anne-lise. Good luck in the contest...Maria xxx
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:30:00 AM
- Maria, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2017 1:44:00 PM
Sunshine, oh so dark for a sun shine girl but I bet a winner in the contest !
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Date: 11/17/2017 2:18:00 PM
- My life is not made of sunshine, B.W. ... even if I wish - Many thanks for your visit and commemt - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2017 7:01:00 AM
Very deep and dark, but never judge a book by its cover.. you did this very well.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:26:00 AM
- You're right, S.O. - But he looks really scary :) - Many thanks for your visit and commemt - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2017 4:15:00 AM
Darkness engulfs, and the demons raise their chalices to wreak havoc on all! They do hide behind their masks, to cover their true identity, for if we knew who they really were...we would never be around them at all (Not saying that we do let them in)! I really loved reading your incredibly well-written poem here this morning! You have delighted me by your clever piece...what a scary pic too! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and commemt, Russell :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2017 10:43:00 PM
Marvelous, Sunshine, imagery is great. luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and commemt, Eve :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2017 8:41:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem, many hide their true faces, sadly they keep lurking.
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:47:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2017 4:29:00 PM
Dark and eerie, Anne-Lise! I like your take on this visual; incidentally I chose the same pict, and my poem also borders on the dark side. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:44:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2017 3:16:00 PM
Ooh ... so scary, Anne-Lise. Love the Gothic imagery. Cool poem w/hot message. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:36:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and commemt, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2017 2:19:00 PM
Well written, Anne Lise! Best for a win!
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Date: 11/16/2017 2:20:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2017 1:43:00 PM
I find the image quite sinister and anyone who covers their face has something to hide:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:09:00 AM
- Yes, that's right Jan - hugs :)
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:35:00 PM
They don't just hide in the dark Anne-Lise - they can wear a smile and mask their lies:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2017 1:53:00 PM
- Anyone can hide in the dark ... and become faceless ... scary - Thank you for your visit and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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