Get Your Premium Membership

' Feel Like a Trash '

Urbane cavalcade - flaunt in gaiety Warbling hymns in ego - cyclicity Jigging gracile moves in vivacity Relishing in zest in this gravity Kinsfolk in flamboyant fete - oh its fate? Smiles, elation in face delineate Like nothing's wrong makes me exasperate No one cares? No one adores? it's too late Recurrent nightmares peeve me in sublime Making incubuses remorse in rhyme Bequeathing qualm, fright and fear - death like crime Kith and kin in laughs while I'm in grave time... ======================================== *rhyme (with ten syllable count ) jun-jun villanueva july 30,2011 ********************************************* It really annoys me when this nightmare always visit me in my bedtime ... this thing is my fright to happen ~~~~dying like no one cares ~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/3/2011 11:37:00 AM
ayan, jun, whoo...a rousing applause to you for the shining win! ..:) huggs!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/3/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/3/2011 7:03:00 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest cory
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 10:50:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, jun-jun. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 9:55:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your HM with this dynamo poetry luv..enjoy special honor for excellence..luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie ,jun-jun
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2011 8:33:00 PM
Well written! Congrats. on your HM. Hope you don't have the dream again-maybe writing about it will help get rid of it.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2011 10:14:00 PM
This would be a terrible dream to have, the pain it must cause, even upon waking. Hope it doesn't happen often jun-jun.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/31/2011 8:41:00 AM
Deep feelings of fright in dreams ... the unexplained that creeps in our sleep always amazes me.... I have a new contest, check it out my Poet friend Michael
Login to Reply
Date: 7/31/2011 8:03:00 AM
INTERESTING poem mate! we care about you, keep em coming you are doing well. good on ya, Don
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things