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- Punctuate a a sign, which gives the reader time to breathe. . . . . I breathe. . .

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/7/2013 5:16:00 AM

love the simplicity of this. Seems like I have'nt conversed with you for a while. Is that just me ? ;} xxx's

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2013 4:35:00 PM

- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/20/2013 8:51:00 AM

I loved this! How wonderful! Yes...a pause! I use this often! :) Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2013 9:11:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/17/2013 12:14:00 PM

A breath of life you've penned! Well done AL Anderson. AO

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2013 12:21:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/17/2013 11:44:00 AM

Your style is rapid and effective. I admire synthetic poetry which allows to breathe......

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2013 11:47:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mario. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/15/2013 9:02:00 PM

Very ineresting and great creativity... I take a sigh of relief.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2013 1:24:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Karen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/15/2013 7:52:00 PM

Anne so true about punctuation. Without any no sense can be made. A cleaver Senyru. Have a great evening. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2013 1:24:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Connie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Donna Jones

Date: 5/15/2013 6:39:00 PM

Ah...something I do too often..pausing to think.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2013 1:23:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Donna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Donna Jones
Date: 5/15/2013 6:40:00 PM

Great line Anne Lise:-)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/15/2013 5:29:00 PM

A breath of fresh air, Anne-Lise! Love it. Yes :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2013 1:23:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/15/2013 4:12:00 PM

Good message. Nicely written Anne :) Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/16/2013 1:22:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2013 2:18:00 PM

Yes, sometimes in reading poetry one needs to slow down to absorb what the writer had to say..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 2:36:00 PM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/15/2013 12:16:00 PM

Interesting and inventive... Great! Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 12:18:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Terry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/15/2013 8:37:00 AM

I love using dots... LOL... Bet you've noticed... This tickled my fancy...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 9:59:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2013 7:12:00 AM

I love your senryu my dear friend Anne Lise. A brilliant idea on how you give importance to punctuation in life through your excellent poem. Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring and wonderful comment on my poems last night. Belated happy Mother's Day. God bless you and your family always! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 7:13:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/15/2013 12:08:00 AM

Very inventive! I liked the way you make the punctuation "come to life". I recall watching an audiotape that was literally all about the history of punctuation, but told in a comical way. These little observations are always fun...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 1:40:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Don Johnson

Date: 5/14/2013 5:43:00 PM

clink clunk permeates the night, is me heart a pounding right, teeth are gripping with me bite, shut up johnson say goodnight...:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 1:39:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Don. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/14/2013 3:14:00 PM

What you have here is something which gives me a smile and an opportunity for a very deep breath. Thank-you for your last comment, by the way. It made me feel appreciated. I am here in Eastern Daylight Time, far away from you. However, I feel thankful for your lovely poetry. The world is wonderfully remarkable in that we can use these tools to share wonderful thoughts! Thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 1:38:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Duke. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/14/2013 3:12:00 PM

I breathe with you.... lovely thought !!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2013 1:37:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/14/2013 11:00:00 AM

Thanks God, it's a breath of Dot ...Dot...Dot. .......Excellent style of Senryu. Thanks......., loved always, b

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 11:34:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/14/2013 8:46:00 AM

Love this... what a breath of fresh air :) xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 9:31:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 5/14/2013 8:26:00 AM

Good one... You made me smile too. Sometimes simplicity is best... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 9:30:00 AM

- Always pleasant with a smile, Jack! - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/14/2013 7:19:00 AM

Was intrigued with the title... You made me smile . BG

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 9:29:00 AM

- Always pleasant with a smile! - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Barbara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes

Date: 5/14/2013 5:13:00 AM

Pauses are like resting places, to allow us to gather strength on the exploration of poetry's mysteries. Well said, Anne-Lise... David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 9:28:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2013 3:52:00 AM

ohhh, those pauses mark a sigh, a change, a final end to a refrain... beautiful way to make the air drift in and out of our life source, anne... BREATHLESS! ...hope mother's day went well.. :) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 4:53:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2013 2:34:00 AM

so clever Anne Lise, in fact very clever,would also make a wonderful senryu....or haiku...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 2:53:00 AM

- I was a little unsure if it could postest under Senryu, thank you Harry. - - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/13/2013 11:46:00 PM

we all should ....... excellent insight dear, Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 2:16:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Suzanne. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)