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The eyes with chains around the feet, they can never see the beauty Beyond the sounds, colors and smell you get sucked up by the darkness Sweep away dust and rat feces the shadows of evil demons The rainbow is a miracle, next moment will never come back Please give life back to these dark eyes Escape from your inconstant mind I swear: even the weeds will shine This song will blow away with time 08.11.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Eight syllables in each line - www.howmanysyllables.com

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/2/2018 12:42:00 AM

Even the weeds will shine. They do indeed and that is the truth of most sadness. Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:30:00 AM

- I am grateful for your comment and visit, Kai :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/12/2018 6:57:00 AM

A song to conquer darkness with its light...Nicely penned Anne..GL in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 7:21:00 AM

- I am grateful for your comment and visit, Joseph - Many thanks :) - Not for contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/12/2018 12:55:00 AM

Excellent and well crafted dark poem. Enjoyed reading it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:57:00 AM

- Many thanks Ravi, for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/12/2018 12:12:00 AM

Oh Anne, you should come to the dark side more often!!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:21:00 AM

- I am grateful for your comment and visit - many thanks, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/10/2018 3:35:00 PM

Wow, excellent poetry, love your dark side.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:20:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/10/2018 2:32:00 PM

Very deep and dark Anne lise, a thought provoking piece:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:20:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/10/2018 7:52:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, this is a different write that comes from your pen and it is exellent. Your words sing out in their strength. Your words sing the emotions of this man in chains. You paint such vivid images Anne-Lise. I love the content. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:19:00 AM

- Hi Mike, I am grateful for your comment and visit - many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/9/2018 4:46:00 PM

Ah, when weeds begin to shine means the sunshine has worked over time. I love it . Have a wonderful weekend dear lady

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:18:00 AM

- I am grateful for your comment and visit, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/9/2018 12:35:00 PM

Dark couplets' Sunshine, written. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:17:00 AM

- Tom, many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2018 8:04:00 AM

A deep little poem, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:17:00 AM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/9/2018 6:01:00 AM

Dark poem in bright poetic background dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:10:00 AM

- Many thanks Demetrios, for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2018 5:18:00 AM

Indeed, this is a different and thought-provoking approach for you, Sunshine. I think you really got inside the head of the man in the photo and related to his hardships. Well done, Hon! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2018 12:10:00 AM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2018 7:32:00 PM

a dark one and very cretive, Ann lise. I really like this.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2018 1:12:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2018 5:03:00 PM

crafted with dark yet strong touches of power, anne... so well done!...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sand Blown

Date: 11/8/2018 3:03:00 PM

casting gargoyles...that is age old

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2018 3:52:00 PM

- A stone statue of a naughty creature, used mainly at ancient churches for directing water from the roof ... that is age old - Thank you very much ... - // Anne-Lise

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2018 1:21:00 PM

Even the weeds will shine-- well said Anne-Lise. The message of your poem is deep.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2018 1:31:00 PM

- I really appreciate your comment, Vijay ... many thanks, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/8/2018 11:25:00 AM

This was really nice my friend, dark and creepy but nice. Best of luck in the contest.

Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2018 11:46:00 AM

Trust me my friend, I know exactly what you mean.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2018 11:45:00 AM

- Thank you very much Chris, I hope you know how important you are to me and my poems :) - Without comment ... my poems would die - hugs // Anne-Lise :)