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- Dancing Notes For Love -

Kissing deep beats fluttering dancing on a breathless whisper A snowdrop falls on the lips melt slowly kiss you beautiful The whisper of your voice, the warmth of your kiss and touch If love is to be true not even a kiss can tear us apart Warmly held under the moon smiling beams brightly shining Love is not a game of the heart where the truth is preserved Loving an angel flying grace inside lit up one of a thousand stars In silence stars twinkle but in the distance we overhear the ocean plays its song Magical sprinkling all stardust trails confetti sparkles flashing I look into your eyes your heart and your soul like a ray of sunlight Silver reflections casting shadows out enchants winks spotlights a dream The stars would shower me with stardust of your smile Written by Liam Mc Daid & A-L Andresen 30.03.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 7:38:00 PM

Liam, thank you for the nice reply.. LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2015 4:45:00 PM

Another great collaborative work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/18/2015 3:49:00 PM

thank you ever so kindly sara for the beautiful comment wishing you a great weekend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 11:45:00 PM

a lovely write the two of you wrote, such a pleasure to have read, -love,p.d.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/18/2015 3:40:00 PM

thank you linda for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated wishing you a lovely weekend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/12/2015 1:22:00 PM

like i told anne, this is exhillirating.. more power to the both of you, liam..huggs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/18/2015 2:48:00 PM

ah thank you nette for the beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend

Len Gasun

Date: 4/11/2015 10:41:00 AM

Another very beautiful masterpiece from both of you my dear friend Liam and Anne Lise! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/12/2015 9:41:00 AM

leonora thank you dear friend for the heartfelt beautiful comment wishing you a blessed day

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/10/2015 5:28:00 PM

Lovely..such a romantic collab. Congratulations, for you two, Liam and Anne.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/10/2015 6:56:00 PM

kim thank you kindly for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/7/2015 8:10:00 AM

A beautiful collaboration.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/10/2015 6:42:00 PM

thank you kindly richard for the wonderful comment wishing you a blessed weekend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/6/2015 2:56:00 PM

Hello Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just awesome!A 7+++ to each!A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart.smiling.I enjoyed it!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^"

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/10/2015 6:41:00 PM

thank you ever so kindly dorian for the very beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed weekend

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/6/2015 2:25:00 PM

Beautiful collab Liam ;) you and Anne Lise do this brilliantly ;) enjoyed this tonight

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/10/2015 6:36:00 PM

thank you ever so kindly wilma for the very beautiful comment wishing you a beautiful weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2015 5:20:00 AM

- Thanks Liam, keep sending me beautiful lines :) - Easter almost over and dailylife restarts, I wish you a great week :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/10/2015 6:27:00 PM

always a pleasure writing with you anne lise wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend pal

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2015 4:44:00 AM

I'm starrry eyed reading this Anne lise and Liam you collaborate so brilliantly together - when the magic is right between two writers is obvious for all to see! Hugs jan xx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/10/2015 5:50:00 PM

ahh your so sweet jan thank you dear pal for the heartfelt beautiful comment wishing you a lovely weekend

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/6/2015 4:05:00 AM

OH...Stars stars stars....I love the stars...I love the ocean...I love nature and you bring it in a heady mix with love so beautifully. Wow, you two! :) Sunshine and you write well together, Liam. Hugs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/10/2015 5:39:00 PM

the stars always in the darkness shines faraway dreams thank you for the beautiful comment eileen anne lise shone the light with her pen in this piece wishing you a beautiful weekend dear pal