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* Bird Soup

Charley crouching quietly, his tail wagging back and forth. Intently watching the birds at the feeder, close by. The birds eating, flying back and forth, his tail going faster. He is thinking I just found my dinner, bird soup yum. Quick as a wink he leaps forward for them, they flutter away. He sits looking puzzled, wondering why they flew away, there went dinner. He gives up, goes back napping and dreams of the 'bird soup that got away'

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Date: 6/1/2009 7:04:00 AM
Such a delightful read! Wanted to stop by and thank you so much for your warm and thoughtful congrats. Appreciate it so much. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/29/2009 5:41:00 PM
My sweetie..on an animal..it is a tail ;) in story is a kind of tale....I enjoyed a good laugh on your kitty and I'm sure the bird did too! Light & Love
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Date: 5/29/2009 10:54:00 AM
lol this was a very nice read/story. very well done; love and peace:james
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