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- Begging Sunlight -

A yellow song about autumn Leaves falling slowly May nature embrace me gently Birds mixing tunes Of such ecstatic sound Rising a sweet melody Creeds and song carried with the wind in the highest tempo Kissing one heart priceless gold Crossing bridges and mountain majesty of the world Rustling softly breathless whispers treasure Most quiet need, by autumn sun and candlelight Like sweet thoughts in a dream Dazzling of wonder as magical charms floating flutters gently on a breeze Delightful day it is for all who dwell delicately blown upon warm sunlight rays The sumptuous yearning of summer that left Breathtaking feeling dance circles around Viewing elements and seasons as they change Deeply touches embracing beauty inside Into the dawn's early and tender caresses You stand in front of the sun morning dewdrops upon your vision Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 16.10.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/27/2015 6:00:00 AM
"A yellow song about autumn" my favorite color and season. This delightful, full of stunning images and feelings of awe. Wonderful collaboration.
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Date: 10/26/2015 8:34:00 AM
After: - Begging Sunlight - comes .... - Priceless Jewel Illuminata - and they are beautiful both of them :) - Thank you my friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2015 1:16:00 PM
a visual delight painted by your golden pens:-) lovely collaboration as ever Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2015 8:24:00 AM
I love the way you painted it! And the nature imagery is so captivating, I truly love it!
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Date: 10/24/2015 7:59:00 AM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!A most beautiful, sweet n' captivating love poem inspired by nature, autumn and all,that you've written here my dearest friends.So much beauty in it.Just dazzling!I love it!A very beautiful, sweet piece so full of light and color to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautifully written.I truly enjoy it!Just awesome!Great imagery!Very enchanting!Excellent piece!Wonderful collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + to each!A Fav!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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