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Woman On Tricycle

Automobile vintage Armed with few horsepowers American girls dreams Amazing and stylish Agile it still rolling Away with big wheel bike Admit, prime example http://www.howmanysyllables.com Each line has only 6 syllables (poem in the Pleiades form) - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/24/2016 12:09:00 PM

Beautiful adventure of wheeler's development and it's importance to American girls. A seven. Beautifully written. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/24/2016 2:00:00 PM

- Thanks my friend Bl, for friendly visits a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Ainsley

Date: 8/18/2016 9:41:00 PM

It made me think of an Mg the cook drove at a county club kitchen I worked at when I was young and ripe with dreams.Now l am so much older and my dreams have turned to .wine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2016 6:29:00 AM

- It's true, our dreams changed over the years - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/16/2016 4:24:00 AM

Hahaha. Bikes have come a long way... Congrats Anne Lise, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2016 7:18:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Teddy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/15/2016 6:29:00 AM

Dreams and adventure go hand in hand, Anne Lise:) I owned a bike, but my dream car never materialized:) ~ Congrats on your fine win! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2016 7:18:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/14/2016 9:13:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your poem made me smile. Congrats on your well written Pleaides! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2016 9:20:00 AM

- Nice to participate, Kim :) - thanks for my win, glad you liked this one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2016 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest Anne-Lise. I enjoyed your entry! ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2016 7:12:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/13/2016 1:26:00 PM

I'm back to say CONGRATS!!!...beautifully done Anne-Lise...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 2:14:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 9:58:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 11:04:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/13/2016 7:14:00 AM

Fascinating....Loved the pic that goes with the poem. American girls chasing their dreams. :) Love from Cyprus.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:23:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Eileen :) - Love from Norway // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/13/2016 7:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:08:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2016 4:18:00 AM

yo, this deserves a win, anne.. sweet congrats!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:08:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo

Date: 8/13/2016 3:50:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:07:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 1:13:00 AM

Nice one. Unique topic!! Congrats on the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:07:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/13/2016 12:35:00 AM

Hi Ann-Lise, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:07:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/12/2016 9:58:00 PM

Such an interesting take on an adveventure theme, congratulations Anne-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:06:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/12/2016 8:49:00 AM

A beautiful Pleiades Anne-Lise...god bless and good luck...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2016 10:51:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/12/2016 1:37:00 AM

Lovely Anne-lise:)All the best:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2016 7:12:00 AM

- Jo, thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/11/2016 5:30:00 AM

Amazing! A seven dear Anne-Lise, hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2016 7:48:00 AM

- Thanks my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2016 4:47:00 AM

greeat theme on a ride and so well composed, anne... a winner for me..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2016 7:47:00 AM

- Nette, thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/10/2016 5:19:00 PM

Never been my dream but then I'm not American lol:-) great take on the contest its quite a challenging form:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2016 7:48:00 AM

- Jan, thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/10/2016 4:34:00 PM

I always pictured you as a motorcycle girl. That long blond hair blowing in the wind. Fun read AL. A very tough and unique form. Good luck!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2016 4:56:00 PM

- I have long blond hair ..... but no motorcycle .... :)))) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/10/2016 3:26:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, You penned a good piece in this difficul form. I agree "we" do dream, girls world wide. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2016 4:58:00 PM

- Yes, it was a bit difficult ... I admit, Alexis :) - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/10/2016 2:35:00 PM

An American boys dream as well A-L.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2016 2:53:00 PM

- Of course, Tim - Thanks for friendly visits and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)