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- a Vision Through Snow Crystals -

A snowflake always spells unique in words Frozen songs from heaven Melting into the heart Stunning winter kisses warm My passion is deep,rooted flowing through the heart Rolling out a carpet of divine purity What better way to rest easy Soft white footprints remain In the snow you’ve made Where an angel dances In a vision of beauty Warmly upon the breath Floating on the wave of love Silver dancing ice breaks This soul can now reach Heaven I melt into your snowflake A winter rose is born Blown forever silken sparkles kiss Into one beauty of a starlight vision On me so deeply inside purity and happiness blooms 26.12.2015 (unrhymed tercets) A Collaborated write by Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 1/25/2017 10:56:00 AM

Given a 7, complimenting the structure, coupled with enchanting imagery, I see the magical inspiration from Liam in this one.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/1/2016 5:39:00 PM

Another lovely collaboration by you two. Enjoyed the read and you both do such a awesome job in writing your poems. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/2/2016 6:18:00 AM

- Thank you, dear Phyllis :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/31/2015 3:41:00 AM

This is another beautiful poem from you my dear friend, Anne Lise. So enjoyed! May I also have this chance to thank you for all the love, support, encouragement that you've extended to me and everything for this year 2015! May the coming year 2016 be the best, most wonderful and blessed year for you and your family! Happy happy New Year! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/31/2015 9:00:00 AM

- Thank you, dear friend Leonora :) - I wish you and your loved ones a happy new year! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/30/2015 7:24:00 AM

sorry for the delay commenting dear friend anne lise finding christmas has large demands on the heart truly a great pleasure sharing pens with you wishing you ringing in the new year lots of happy smiles

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/30/2015 7:43:00 AM

.......better late .....than never, dear Liam :) - Happy New Year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/28/2015 5:17:00 PM

Well this is a very nice write . Hope you had a nice Christmas my long distance friend :) H ave a blessed Happy New Year XXXXX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/29/2015 2:46:00 AM

- Dear friend Debbie, a pleasure that you enjoy our poem : - A Vision Through Snow Crystals - Happy New Year ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2015 5:13:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your collaborative work..Reads like a winner if written for a contest...Way to go..Thank you for stopping by..Camellia(Rose Of Winter) is a shrub/tree that we have here in USA..I enjoy seeing the blossoms during the winter months..Sometimes the cold gets them and sometimes too much rain gets the blossoms but they do add a touch of color to the landscape when it is usually bleak..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2015 5:19:00 AM

Okay...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/29/2015 2:44:00 AM

- We never write for contest, dear Sara ..... we write for each other and anyone who wants to read our co write - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2015 3:56:00 PM

A beautiful poem with a complimentary title! One can tell that you two do truly write for the love of writing! Keep up the good work...mix ink:) ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/29/2015 2:45:00 AM

- I am grateful that you enjoy our writing, Paul :) - Many thanks for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/28/2015 9:04:00 AM

i feel beauty hides in beauty my lovely lovely friends. Both are genius, i know well. Well done and wish you good luck if for contest. A clean 7 i think. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2015 11:35:00 AM

- We never write for contest ..... we write for each other and anyone who wants to read our co write - I am grateful that you enjoy our writing dear friend Bl :) - Many thanks for comments and one 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/28/2015 5:31:00 AM

Certain it is an angel is whispering in your ears those heavenly sentences and an other is holding your pen for such a poetic achievement of you two: Anne-Lise and Liam! Congratulations and thank you for the beauty offered! A seven to each!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2015 11:41:00 AM

- How could you know ....... :) ..... - There is an angel, my friend Demetrios - Always beautiful words from you, many thanks for comments and a 7 - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/28/2015 12:52:00 AM

Anne Lise and Liam, great poets bound together to weave delicate lovely poems.. hats off to you!!!~Olive Eloisa hugs@!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2015 3:30:00 AM

- A pleasure that you enjoy our poem : - A Vision Through Snow Crystals -, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robyn Campbell

Date: 12/27/2015 1:44:00 PM

This took my breath away. You are a fabulous poet along with your collaborator. The line "Blown forever silken sparkles kiss" is a most perfect line of poetry. Gorgeous!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2015 3:28:00 AM

- Robyn, thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/27/2015 1:09:00 PM

belated congrats on the POTD, anne and liam... huggs on this peaceful sunday!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/27/2015 1:17:00 PM

- Do you mean our p.o.t.d. : Dec 7, 2015 - Between Two Heartbeat - ???? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/27/2015 8:07:00 AM

Beautiful collaboration. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2015 3:28:00 AM

- Hansteven, thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/27/2015 6:56:00 AM

Such a lovely breath taking poem , I really enjoyed reading it...Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :) dalia

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2015 3:27:00 AM

- Dalia, a pleasure that you enjoy our poem : - A Vision Through Snow Crystals - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/26/2015 8:00:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise and Liam: Passionate, soulful, with a touch of the divine and the warmth of love and beauty through the vision and wonder of a snowflake. A brilliantly rendered Tercet here!! TR/FAV for sure!! Happy New Year and Best Wishes Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/27/2015 6:08:00 AM

- Dear Gary, thank you for taking time to read our poem (I know you have much to do) - Special thanks for TR/FAV :) - I wish you and Ingrid a peaceful new year 2016 ! - hugs & love // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2015 5:46:00 PM

absolutely breathtaking Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/27/2015 5:51:00 AM

- Jan,thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/26/2015 2:28:00 PM

radiant like you, dear anne.. so beautifully expressed... happy holydays to you and the family..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/26/2015 2:35:00 PM

- Merry Christmas and thank you kindly, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/26/2015 12:41:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!This is a very beautiful,romantic, passionate,dreamy,captivating and heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!I just love it.A true golden gem!Another very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful,romantic n' sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration! Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/26/2015 1:16:00 PM

- Dorian, thank you for lovely comments a 7 +++ and visit :) - Enjoy the rest of Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)