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Emptiness is so great, a big piece of heart is gone The anxiety spreads in the body so incredibly cruel The child died in the womb before week 24 A birth without hope born in silence and died in silence A small white coffin Goodbye my first child Grief, fear and hope The desire to have a child again was strong But the fear left shade on the joy The pregnancy was so exhausting Frightening feelings and lack of control Nine months can be a long time A beautiful summer day, the time had come The new child was born and cried with powerful lungs Whether you believe it or not it was a wonderful music to our ears 02/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Music to my Ears Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 2nd place in the contest

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Date: 3/8/2019 6:28:00 AM
Beautiful. Was a pleasure to read. Thank you.
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Date: 3/8/2019 6:43:00 AM
- John, many thanks for the friendly visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2019 2:32:00 PM
Now that was truly music to your ears. What a great way to take the theme , Anne LIse. Congrats for the win
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Date: 2/21/2019 8:40:00 AM
- Many thanks Andrea, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/18/2019 7:03:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, two strong emotions contrast in this beautiful poetic gem. It is a piece that does touch the heart of many. Sorrow and joy, childbirth, the greatest gift of all. The most wonderful music of all, the cry of a newborn baby. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/18/2019 1:43:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting, lovely comment and congratulations, my friend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/17/2019 1:59:00 PM
Very moving Anne-Lise, congrats. :)
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Date: 2/18/2019 12:06:00 AM
- Many thanks Gary, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2019 3:30:00 PM
Very touching! many congrats on your win, Sunshine.
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Date: 2/17/2019 1:08:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2019 2:56:00 PM
A most moving piece, Sunshine. A beautiful tribute. Congrats on your piece.
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Date: 2/17/2019 1:07:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2019 8:57:00 AM
A veyr different take to the contest, so glad there was a happy ending... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/17/2019 1:06:00 PM
- Many thanks for a place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/13/2019 12:26:00 PM
Hi Sunshine Smile - I see below from Carolyn's comment that this is for a poetry contest, a very heart rending exp. to lose a child especially when he is born full term and dies 5 days later. And the utimate feeling of ecstatic joy when you have a 2nd healthy bouncy baby who cries with his first breath - breathtaking! This happened to me in reality Sunshine Smile, I have written 2 poems some time ago, one is called The cry of an Angel and the other one An Answer to a Prayer. Poetry Hugs, JP.
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Date: 2/13/2019 12:51:00 PM
- I rarely write about my own experiences dear Jennifer, but there are many mothers who experience this ... one will never forget that child one lost ... a vast heartbreaking loss - Many thanks for visit and your comment, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2019 2:57:00 PM
nothing can compare to the first live wail of a newborn... beautiful in its sadness, yet joyful the second time around, anne... happy huggs
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:25:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2019 1:23:00 PM
Beautiful the first cry of a newborn! Wonderful!
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:25:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2019 10:19:00 AM
This is excellent--so moving, Anne-Lise! Janice
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:24:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2019 7:56:00 AM
Under the circumstances you describe, surely the crying seemed like music. You developed your creative concept beautifully, Sunshine. Best wishes for a win in the contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:23:00 PM
- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, dear Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2019 3:47:00 PM
What a wonderful ending to your poem, Anne-Lise..a brilliant contrast in the two stanzas. So true to real life.
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Date: 2/12/2019 1:36:00 AM
- A tragedy ... and a joy ... that many experience, Vijay - Many thanks for the friendly visit and your comment my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2019 2:51:00 PM
A powerful, emotive poem. Well done! :)
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Date: 2/12/2019 1:34:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, Heidi :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and your comment my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2019 2:42:00 PM
Beautiful verse Sunshine that starts with sadness' but ends in joy. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 2/12/2019 1:29:00 AM
- Most often we get a new chance, we must never lose hope :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and your comment my friend Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/11/2019 2:13:00 PM
There is no more melodic music than the cry of a newborn baby my dearest , friend, Anne-Lise! A moving and touching poem! Hugs xxx
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Date: 2/12/2019 1:28:00 AM
- A music everyone loves :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and your comment my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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