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Two cute little angels Blue beautiful eyes To heaven they soar The stars glow One heart beat One heart can burst Quiet sleep Loss and pain Soft kisses Nothing is forgotten Two hearts beats Two hearts can burst The joy was great The loss tremendously A mom and dad Without happiness One last minute Their hearts beats but ... have burst 26.08.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/3/2018 8:33:00 AM
A very nice and beautiful write, I always love reading your poems and thanks alot for commenting on my poem, good luck
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Date: 2/3/2018 11:36:00 AM
- Many thanks Faraz, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2017 6:25:00 AM
A poignant write Anne...best wishes
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:16:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/16/2017 4:09:00 AM
An unimaginable grief penned from your beautiful heart with love and care. Gorgeous writing Anne-Lise xo
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:25:00 AM
- Lynn, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 4:26:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, this is a beautiful, yet sad write. There can be such beauty in sadness, especially when your words do flow. As always, your gentle style of writing takes this sadness to a new realm. Your heart sings through the words. Such a sad situation, very sad, made so special by your gentle style. Your special touch is on this peace. Has to be a fave. Hugs....MIke. XX
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Date: 8/28/2017 2:28:00 PM
- A wound in the heart that will never heal, Mike - It must feel like an eternal nightmare // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 4:19:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, i am glad i decided to pay one more visit before i did shut down. Such a sad yet beautiful write Anne-Lise. Your gentle words sing and the beauty of the images does come. Your words are the pillow's in Heaven. You always seem to touch the right tone in your work Anne-Lise. This is a definite fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/28/2017 2:29:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visit, a fave and lovely comment, my friend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 9:29:00 AM
Very soft and sad, Anne-lise:)
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Date: 8/27/2017 9:57:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 7:02:00 AM
Such a sad, poignant poem, Anne-Lise :( Regards, John.
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Date: 8/27/2017 7:11:00 AM
- Terribly sad, John :( - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 4:13:00 AM
Very sad and heart breaking write. Felt it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:58:00 AM
- Ravi, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2017 3:05:00 AM
Tragic for parents something that one doesn't get over for a long time. Still one comforting thought is that they're in a much more Ethereal place, Just lovely Anne-Lise, and the image is absolutely beautiful...Maria xxx
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:58:00 AM
- Many thanks dear Maria, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 9:43:00 PM
This is so terribly sad Anne-Lise! I love the cute little gif!
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:57:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Dean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 7:49:00 PM
Oh Anne Lise, this heartbreaking but knowing they are angels, lifts the heart from its sorrow. So beautifully sad my friend. Made me think of my baby niece. That photo is so adorable... hugs :)
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:56:00 AM
- Many thanks Akkina, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 5:55:00 PM
Heartbreaking!
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 5:47:00 PM
This is a very deeply moving poem. Well written. Tragic.
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:55:00 AM
- Janis, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 5:07:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , very sad emotional write , there is no coping or moving on from such a painful loss , parents first in a perfect world but sadly we do not have that :( hugs xx
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:54:00 AM
- So true, Niall :( - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 4:45:00 PM
Very sad, it pains me to even think of such an event, the poem expresses these emotions so well!
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Date: 8/27/2017 6:53:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 3:07:00 PM
I can't imagine the pain of losing children of any age and this reminds me of my son's friends who died in 2014:-( hugs Jan x
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:57:00 PM
- A tragedy that will never be forgotten, Jan - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 2:58:00 PM
So sad, so cute and I agree with Vijay, about finding heaven!
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:55:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2017 2:40:00 PM
Sad but real--happy that the angels found heaven--full of emotion, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:54:00 PM
- Many thanks Vijay, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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