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Penultimate Dawn

And would I write of all the lesser staples of the trivia that pass before my mind while history is borne--it is of man, the swell of glory in his chest. The ages pass before him, he to stand, select the argument, the passion in it-- he to put in place demand, a price, a crest to rule when time slows down its pace. There looking up, I see the restless skies; they'll not be conquered by a man, nor by a god that he creates. He, the one to see, to be creature of his science which sees of its own, creates a reference to its own. Its flight is free, and shares one thing alone--one basic power, one love. ~

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Date: 3/31/2015 7:44:00 PM
This one content wise I am unsure what you are trying to say. So, the content is ambiguous? [check when to use that and when to use which and when to leave the word out?] use more sensory input. I think you should be using [his] instead of [he]. What do we picture when this is read? What do we hear? Where's the emotion? Light & Love
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Robert Ludden
Date: 3/31/2015 10:19:00 PM
Thank you. You've now given me something to work on!
Date: 10/17/2014 11:27:00 AM
Yes in the face of it all, man is only as great as the love he creates. Very thought provoking.
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Robert Ludden
Date: 10/17/2014 12:10:00 PM
Thanks,Suzanne

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