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Reflections In the Mist

There was silence in the rainforest, but only for the briefest time After the predawn storms abated, before the brilliant morning sunrise The first to stir about was the quiet movement of the mist Rising from the pond, and swirling on the giant fronds Making its majestic, mosaic climb through the foliage of leaf and vine Ephemeral vapors wafting on the spires of the wind Reflections in the mist, echoes back to paradise Ripples from a distant perfect past, a glimpse of when we had unending life The sounds of the rainforest slowly emerge, the call of the cuckoo and motmot bird, through the mist that begins to fade The purr of the jaguar, the rustle of the king boa The tropic voices from ground to sky are heard through the mist that slowly drifts away Reflection of the garden of Eden dissipates Reflections in the mist, future images billowing in a sparkling haze Return and take us back, take us back to long forgotten days

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Date: 9/23/2017 11:09:00 PM
Great allegory. The metaphor extends from the far past to the present and the word pictures are too many to name.
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Date: 6/15/2017 10:54:00 PM
I love the words up there. They just take the reader to other realms :)
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:32:00 PM
mellow sentiments make this work ohh so lovely, freddie..huggs
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Date: 10/5/2016 11:49:00 PM
This poem really makes one yearn for the forgotten past, I believe it still runs through our veins. DNA so to speak. Some dreams cannot be explained. Well penned Freddie. /|\ I have noticed that you are relatively new to the soup also! There are so many great poets on here don't you agree? Very inspirational indeed. /|\
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/7/2016 2:50:00 AM
I agree w/you wholeheartedly, Rick. Fantastic talent on display at this site. Appreciate the kind words, friend. Will read some more of your work before signing off. Ty and much love to you.
Date: 10/3/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, Sarah for the most kind words. I am thrilled that the poem gave you a good memory of an enjoyable time in your life. I am very honored that you were the first to comment on this poem. It is one of my personal favorites. It is a very spiritual poem. I hope to read more of you prose. I look forward to that very much so. Love and peace to you and yours.
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Date: 10/2/2016 6:35:00 AM
I really like this poem because it is evocative for me of my time spent in the beautiful lush botanic gardens and forests on Hawai'i Big Island and on Oahu. I especially like the lines about it being majestic and mosaic and about the foliage. Even if yours is a different forest, I like that it takes me back to mine. Thanks for your comments on my 'Castles' x
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