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Oge

OGE Crushed dreams exploded friendships eroded, stubbornness, selfishness and ego interceded, expectations of true friendships forever eroded. Mystique, curiosity gives the urge to peek, but critiques week after week , send a message there's a mean streak. Always like a kid wanting to be applauded,or a confused adult needing to be lauded, friendly at times, ugly at others . Yoyo idiosyncrasies flexing like Jekyll and Hyde, a crazy pretender, never had a nurturer, stuck in mixed moods one that love and friendships eludes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/17/2015 4:53:00 PM
The more I read your work the more I am blown away. This is my favorite!
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Date: 4/29/2015 12:05:00 PM
really expressive! May I ask how you came up with the title?
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Joan Williams
Date: 4/29/2015 3:23:00 PM
Backwards its EGO ... funny I wrote this one day when a rather overwhelming friend (a movie maker but cannot write) throws a tantrum because I was having a small gathering of writers artists, close friends over for my birthday (about 12 ppl) he wanted to bring an entourage, I insisted no just 2 ppl he could bring , well it was the last fit he threw concerning me....a great stage play actor too, very spoiled . after writing it My son suggested calling it OGE for ego....I don't consider myself a poet I have many thoughts and want to get feedback here about poetry I write because I write on issues mainly...I cant write a love poem or a long poem. LOL

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