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When We Met

~When We Met.~ Battling everyday is so hard to maintain a healthy brain to keep up with our everyday work our thoughtful speculations of wanting the impossible to take place,has to change,by gaining self confidence and become independent. When we just met at the hotel lobby for recollection of work,accompanying us the sounds of 4 of July in LA. Our ceaseless conversations felt flawless immediately. A faultless intimate sharing took over a mixture of work and pleasure. When we just met,our loving nature coincided with authentic sounds of fireworks plus its music filling the sky with a huge combination of the most beautiful Technicolor's of fireworks. The sounds with musical lights combined together allowed our eyes to sparkle more than ever,both of us became in a pensive dreamy mood for a rightful discussion about how love can start by romancing, to evolve later into a durable long lived relationship. He was so much my type of a man,an artist in his work, very authentic,fancy,& has an unforgettable sense of humor. Smiling drinking and eating with our discussing, constantly allowed us to remain in high spirits, behind us the sky illuminated our joy of being together,that delightful lasting closeness felt like a challenge awaiting for the unpredictable to happen,the tremendous sounds of fireworks accompanied with a charming tempo ringing in out thoughts. Instantly our touching hands felt permissive, stimulative,devoted,his voice transformed into an echo inviting me to later go up into his room to heat up the bed and enjoy cooling off our desires. Having asked me before about what color of roses I love, Yellow. Later on hand by hand once inside the room it was filled with yellow roses everywhere,and layered on the beautiful bed. Suddenly, he threw my hand bag and held me so tight to waltz to the sounds of music,a telepathy between us and the sounds rang in our ears as a sweet mixture of music. Immediately took my hand kissed it with his warmest lips begging to love me tonight,what a gentleman our body connection was authentic,flirting as a start was conceived in an artistic way,kissing wise and making love was memorable, slowly the sounds ended while gradually our naked bodies parted in the morning when our routine for work had to take place. We parted with a long sexual kiss,emancipating another brutal night with a candle light. Therese Bacha 1/7/2014

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Date: 12/7/2014 7:40:00 PM
A lovely evocation of a magical meeting. Keep the candles burning - on both ends if need be.
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:07:00 AM
Terry; This is deep with much sincere feelings. You know - the way that we meet that one special person, we will never forget. Let the candle always glow. Have a great day......Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 10:28:00 AM
Hi Lucy, so so nice of you love your comments. So happy you enjoyed reading it. Love Terry xoxoxoxo
Date: 4/14/2013 7:29:00 AM
Wow...very cool, authentic emotion in this honest beauty, Therese! Thanks for stopping by...jimbo
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 7:33:00 AM
Thanks James, your comments encourage me more to write. Have a nice day. Terry xoxo
Date: 4/14/2013 2:06:00 AM
awesome story, just like the candle light warm sincere and heartfelt...
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 4:47:00 AM
Thank you Harry so much, have a nice day
Date: 4/13/2013 10:00:00 PM
What a beautiful story of a lovely romance....
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 10:12:00 PM
Hi Donna, its always so nice of you to come by, i am happy you liked it. Thank you. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/13/2013 9:17:00 PM
This is beautiful Terry, and very sad. I like the trace of light that was left behind in your heart.... Enjoyed, your poem :-) Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT xox~LINDA""
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 10:14:00 PM
Hello our poet PD, thank for your good night wish, and passing by, and enjoying my poem. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/13/2013 6:47:00 PM
Hi Terry, It's beautifully done and i did enjoy it thoroughly, thnx for your visit :) Jag
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 10:16:00 PM
Hi Jag, thank you for reading my poem, have a nice evening. Terry xo
Date: 4/13/2013 4:07:00 PM
This has to be your best poem by far that you have shared with us here on the Soup! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! You have created a wondrous piece here my friend! Thanks for stopping by my poetry! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 4:11:00 PM
So sorry Russell, i send Gail comments to you by mistake. Hi Russell, thank you for reading my poem, its always so comforting to read your sincere comments. Love Terry xoxo
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 4:07:00 PM
Gail, so nice of you to pass again, i do appreciate that a lot. Glad you liked my poem. Have a wonderful happy weekend. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/13/2013 2:45:00 PM
Such a treasure of the heart, yellow roses would forever be! Lovely poem, Therese!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 3:00:00 PM
Carrie so happy you passed by, i love your smile in your picture. Thank you for reading my poem. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/13/2013 1:52:00 PM
It is so beautiful and true as you yourself are! A magnificent and romantic poem speaking of how love ought to be! I am back!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/13/2013 1:59:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, so happy you are back, and thank you for passing by, & your comments are very uplifting. Love Terry xoxo

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