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The Mighty Oak

It was always there, rooted deeply, in my backyard. That mighty oak, it was so beautiful, so noble, and strong. ~~~ As a child, I would climb up into its arms, and sit there for hours finding comfort. It became a part of me, its' spirit ran through me and we were as one. ~~~ Through the years, as I grew older, I would take my burdens, and sit by my tree, And, it would unburden me. It was my pillar of strength, ~~~ Now the mighty oak lies toppled. I touch his withered limbs and cry. And as his spirit rushes through me, I hear him say goodbye. ~~~ And my world is changed for ever; it can never be the same. For - tonight my father died.

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Date: 2/13/2011 3:04:00 PM
wonderful piece! Thanks for sharing this with us. Congrats on having your poem bieng featured this week. Keep writing dear friend! Wishing you many more feature. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:27:00 AM
I Love this write....It really touched me...I thought it was BEAUTIFUL...
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:28:00 AM
Powerful poem. The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having it featured! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/13/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your work being featured on homepage this week..Enjoyed the very emotive and expressive work..I like the comparison that you used here..Sara
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Date: 2/9/2011 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 2:03:00 PM
Good comparison, Lainie. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:26:00 AM
Congrats Lainie on this wonderful tribute to your father being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/6/2011 5:56:00 PM
Cpngrats Laine on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. a great one to share with us all with luv..my friend..
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Date: 2/6/2011 3:22:00 PM
Wow...I had never read this one of yours....and I have to say, it gave me such a feeling of goosebumps, and sadness. What a touching place you took me with this lovely poem.
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Date: 8/30/2009 7:26:00 AM
Incredible write Elaine, a heartfelt read. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem>>James
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