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Eight months ago, a white coffin was carried out Four men in black suits ... not a shadow of a doubt It was the priest who locked the door, nothing to think about On the stairs next to the flowerpot with dead red clover A yellow, dirty bowl without a drop - no sign of the owner Small cat tracks in the snow, faithfulness on its shoulder 30/08/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Six Lines Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode 2nd place in the contest

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Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2019 3:23:00 PM

Sunshine, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent rhyming poem, it touched my heart ! Well done !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:09:00 AM

- Thank you for my placement on your winners list, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/2/2019 6:06:00 PM

A haunting six lines, Anne-Lise. Congrats on your richly deserved trophy win in the contest! :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2019 5:09:00 PM

I really loved this one Anne-Lise:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith

Date: 9/2/2019 1:55:00 PM

Excellent poetry, congrats Anne-Lise. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/2/2019 12:56:00 PM

so poignant but very well penned my friend, congrats on your win...this one lingers on after the read ...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:06:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/2/2019 11:23:00 AM

such vivid imagery. congrats on a great win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:05:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/2/2019 11:09:00 AM

This was simply amazing like John tugs at my heart! Congrats!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:05:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf

Date: 9/2/2019 10:40:00 AM

This one really tugs at my heart, Anne-Lise, and the picture looks just like one of our cats. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for visit and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2019 9:07:00 AM

aww Anne-Lise this is heartbreaking in so many ways:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2019 1:10:00 PM

- Many thanks for visits and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/31/2019 10:13:00 PM

This is so sad, it happens though. Well done, evokes an emotional response.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2019 1:10:00 PM

- Many thanks for visits and comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There

Date: 8/30/2019 3:59:00 PM

Interesting and well expressed piece. Faithful to the end and beyond... poor kitty.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2019 1:09:00 PM

- Many thanks for visits and comments, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Yasmin Ilahi

Date: 8/30/2019 3:28:00 PM

Sad poem. Can resonate with everyone in life we lose and we gain it’s the cycle of life yet beautiful memories can live on forever

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2019 3:34:00 PM

- Yes, you are completely right - Many thanks for your lovely comments, Yasmin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/30/2019 2:27:00 PM

Makes you sad for the poor cat who was left without anyone to care for it. Thankful they are hunters and can fend for themselves. Still a sad poem. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2019 2:55:00 PM

- Poor little, he is still waiting for the door to open ... and a small splash of milk - Many thanks for visits and comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)