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IN _ the white painted gate two deciduous trees as a frame _ many roadless memories ... _ gray concrete - stealing the nature _ EXIT 08/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 12/27/2019 5:31:00 AM
Wow. I like that. The poem hurts and that is good. Happy New Year, Kai
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/29/2019 8:06:00 AM
- Many thanks Kai, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/10/2019 7:33:00 AM
I dislike concrete jungles and especially when land is poached and encroached upon, chasing away fauna, and killing flora. Love your poem dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 11/10/2019 7:40:00 AM
- Gray concrete jungles is awfully ugly ... - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2019 11:08:00 AM
You described the concrete jungle very well..
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Date: 11/10/2019 6:51:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2019 7:27:00 AM
so sad to see them constantly taking nature away and replacing it...the wildlife has nowhere to play and they wonder why bear walk in our backyards... good one Anne-Lise... have a great weekend! hugs :)
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Date: 11/10/2019 6:50:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/9/2019 7:13:00 AM
Well structured! ( pun intended!) I so agree with your expression, Great write and good luck in the contest Anne-Lise xxoo
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Date: 11/10/2019 6:50:00 AM
- Many thanks Mike, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 8:18:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, this is an excellent write. We are taking too much of nature away, through building such monstrosities. It reads like a winner to me Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/10/2019 6:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 7:58:00 PM
GOOD writing. Good message.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2019 6:49:00 AM
- Many thanks Andrea, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 2:41:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise!
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Date: 11/10/2019 6:48:00 AM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 2:14:00 PM
I can feel it--you dislike the structure--it sure doesn't look pleasing!
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Date: 11/10/2019 6:48:00 AM
- Many thanks Vijay, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 1:43:00 PM
Well done Anne-Lise! :)
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Date: 11/8/2019 1:45:00 PM
- Many thanks Heidi, for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/8/2019 1:27:00 PM
Nicely done my friend. I can feel the angst in this.
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Date: 11/8/2019 1:35:00 PM
- The concrete is ugly  ... and makes long, cold shadows Chris ... we must take care of nature, enjoy the sunrise and sunset - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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