Unsaid Feelings Concealed

Of what the ocean is made
Nothing else but the heart of cloud
In billion drops of water
One making the other bigger
Fused in blue vastness portrayed
The efforts riding waves crash on cliffs unsaid.

Of what the life is made
Nothing else but the shadow of heart
In billion drops of tear
Joy and grief in tandem bear
Welded in welling emotions unswayed
The toils of life remain unsaid.

Of what you are made
Nothing else but the glint of sun
In billion drops of dew
On the grass of morning meadow
Convey tender feelings frayed
Your fear of fading remains unsaid.

September 13, 2017.



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Date: 9/24/2017 10:00:00 AM
I believe this is the first time our paths have crossed, Subimal, and I'm impressed by this lovely poem. I like the content and the repeated/slightly altered lines produce the desired effect. ~ Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/25/2017 12:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paul. Yes, but it's always nice to cross path with like minded people. I really appreciate your comments. Please visit me again.
Date: 9/23/2017 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:58:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 9/23/2017 12:03:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:58:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 9/23/2017 9:18:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your on your beautifully penned verses, you picked one of my favorite forms, well done!
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Date: 9/13/2017 10:30:00 AM
Very nice Subimal :)
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Date: 9/14/2017 2:13:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 9/13/2017 6:01:00 AM
A beautiful poem to start the day--well done Subimal!
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Date: 9/14/2017 2:13:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay for appreciating.