Our love's forever strong

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Song about rebuilding trust in a marriage.


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Our love's forever strong

When the dark clouds, surrounded you...
and...infiltrated...your mind...

it made you...lose...your faith in me...
and so...
you took all, that you could take

Bridge 1
but, God...gave me...the strength
and, a feeling...of peace...came over me

Chorus
My love's yours...and...your love's mine
our love is eternal...so you can take your time
to...believe in love...cause
our love is forever strong... and it will never change

Through the darkness...shone a light...
and I knew that...there was hope

that you would finally see...my integrity
and that it... was our love...at stake

Bridge 2
Oh, believe in me...believe in us
it will take some time to regain our trust
but, 
our love's forever strong...and it will never change

Chorus
My love's yours...and...your love's mine
our love is eternal...so you can take your time
to...believe in love...cause
our love is forever strong... and it will never change

Now, I know you think that your confidence is gone...
but, our love has made it through the trials ...all along

Now, I know that you and I are meant to be
and, all you need to do is...believe in me

cause, our love's forever strong, and it will never change

Chorus
My love's yours...and...your love's mine
our love is eternal...so you can take your time
to...believe in love...cause
our love is forever strong... and it will never change

cause, our love's forever strong, and it will never change
cause, our love's forever strong, and it will never change
cause, our love's forever strong, and it will never change

repeat and fade to zero


John Derek Hamilton
September 12,2017



Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/3/2017 8:00:00 AM
John these are beautifully written words written in your poetry. Have a nice day my friend.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/3/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Darlene for your kind visit and positive review of my song!
Date: 9/17/2017 9:25:00 PM
John, I love your lyrics, you are a master. I know all about true lovrle and forever love, sadly mine is a name engraved
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/18/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Constance,I appreciate your generous comments sadly my wife is ill and is not responding to treatment could be an indefinite hospital stay,I am brokenhearted. I know you understand.
Date: 9/16/2017 7:26:00 AM
Wonderful lyrics John, I'm sure it sounds amazing...Maria
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/16/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Maria, I appreciate your opinion and positive feedback!
Date: 9/15/2017 8:44:00 PM
True love never dies John. I love your song, the lyrics and lines are beautiful. I truly enjoyed your song tonight!
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/16/2017 12:20:00 AM
Thanks Susan
Date: 9/15/2017 3:59:00 PM
Thanks SO it's true although in our case the only thing that went wrong was her perception of wrong I'm hoping with medication she will get better and we can go back to our normal life. Thanks for your visit and comment!
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Silent One
Date: 9/15/2017 4:32:00 PM
I wish you all the best, hope your wife gets better soon..
Date: 9/15/2017 3:27:00 PM
When trust is broken, it is very difficult to rebuild.. Great song lyrics
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/15/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thanks SO for the visit and comment!
Date: 9/14/2017 8:08:00 PM
Another wonderful song, John. You really have the knack!! You are the lyrics writer of Soup!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/14/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, yeah it's strange that to me songwriting is easier than poetry, you know structure, rhyme scheme, syllable count, too hard! Hey whatever happened to Dave the lyric man, he's gone too?
Date: 9/13/2017 10:59:00 AM
Lot's of folks can hum along to this one John, well done
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Date: 9/13/2017 1:00:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, yeah too many can relate, but I never thought it would happen to me!
Date: 9/13/2017 1:18:00 AM
Such an emotional poem John that I guess is a pretty personal one for you but of course many can relate to these lyrics:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/13/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan, yeah it is something that many can relate to, but true love can overcome anything!